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Sweet Sweet Life

Our world,our country,our community,our home, Where we live,learn,grow and play, Where after life journey,no matter how short, Our temple called flesh will lay, So lets move with no delay, To improve on our living each day, Look around,see what needs to be done, Lets approach it as if it's all about having fun, Let not vanity lead you astray, Or with you the devil will play, Embrace God,have faith,please pray, Live life, be considerate,give love, And lets make our life a happy spiritual adventure....

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Papa Kofi Joel

Date: 4/20/2021 2:33:00 PM

Really nice.. Thanks for sharing

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/8/2013 9:00:00 PM

Richard; I like this very much. I like that you put God in your life. That is great. A lot more people need to do the same. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Richard Palmer
Date: 1/9/2013 3:49:00 AM

thanks Lucilla,without God we are nothing

Saleem Durrani

Date: 11/8/2012 12:16:00 AM

Richard very beautifully written, just love the way you have expressed each word in its true meaning of how life is to be shared with beautiful people living all around us, And understanding the very true meaning of being a part of society as a whole. Great write. takecare brother.

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/8/2012 4:21:00 AM

thank you very much Saleem,take care too bro

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2012 8:30:00 AM

Happy to join you on this path, the reason it is narrow is that not enough people have chosen it. Another great message Richard. Have a great day and God Bless.

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/1/2012 8:44:00 AM

welcome Richard,we will have a wonderful time

Sherese Gooden

Date: 10/19/2012 11:19:00 PM

Hey Richard, nice to hear positive words in our times.

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/20/2012 4:58:00 PM

thanks I think we need to Sherese

Camelia Radu

Date: 10/19/2012 3:57:00 AM

You have a special energy in verse, which gives to with ease. I like your verse rich

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/19/2012 7:03:00 PM

thank you very much Camelia

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/16/2012 2:35:00 PM

Sounds like the perfect journey to me.

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 3:31:00 PM

pack a bag,lets go,lol,thanks Carol

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/13/2012 6:58:00 PM

The poem sits on the high pedestal of vision and foresight. An amazing write with a great message. The Greek philosopher Socrates preached virtue. He advised Athenians to shun the pursuit of wealth and pleasure. According to him only virtuous life leads to happiness. I can see a glimpse of this philosophy in your poem. Richard, Thanks also for your appreciation of my poem The Cry of Heart. -Mohammad

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/13/2012 8:10:00 PM

thanks Mohammad,enjoy reading your work

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/11/2012 7:15:00 PM

Some great advice to keep life liveable; maybe it's time to look on the bright side of things and shed what we can't change. I'm with you in these wise words!

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/12/2012 9:03:00 AM

thats how it is,glad to have you on board,thanks Elizabeth

Jessica K

Date: 10/10/2012 9:35:00 AM

Have to favorite this one Richard! I cant even tell you which line I like the best because they are so interconnected with each other perfectly

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/10/2012 2:33:00 PM

you are welcome Jessica,thanks very much

Monique Brandt

Date: 10/8/2012 11:01:00 AM

I love this. You have me ready to embrace this adventure called life. Thanks for the great read! *Monique

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/8/2012 12:09:00 PM

you are welcome Monique,embrace it well

Sherese Gooden

Date: 10/7/2012 7:50:00 PM

Conscious lyrics, Rich. keep them coming.

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/8/2012 8:49:00 AM

I will Sherese,I will,thanks dear

Patricia Prescott

Date: 10/6/2012 12:46:00 PM

Happy spiritual adventure, Richard, I enjoyed this one too..........

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/6/2012 3:12:00 PM

thanks much Patricia

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/6/2012 6:21:00 AM

In this sweet small Poem you have sketched some beautiful lines."Our world, our country, our community, our home, Where we live,learn,grow and play, Where after life journey,no matter how short, Our temple called flesh will lay" Beautiful write and thank you Richard for your kind comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/6/2012 6:24:00 AM

thanks much

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/5/2012 7:56:00 PM

We are all pieces of a bigger puzzle. Good write.

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/5/2012 8:34:00 PM

thanks Robert

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 10/5/2012 4:43:00 PM

nice Sandy

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/5/2012 8:33:00 PM

thanks much Sandy

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/4/2012 5:15:00 PM

great words indeed, enjoyed reading, Richard! jag

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/5/2012 12:06:00 PM

thanks JAG,keep reading

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2012 12:28:00 PM

If everyone only could, it would be a better world..Sara

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/5/2012 12:06:00 PM

thank you Sara,which we all could

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/4/2012 12:28:00 AM

WONDERFUL ADVICE RICHARD AS WE EMBRACE EACH NEW DAY WITH PASSION AND LOVE OF LIFE .. THANKXX FOR SHARING THIS RARE BEAUTY LUV ..

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/4/2012 10:03:00 AM

thank you my Sweetheart,oxox

Len Gasun

Date: 10/3/2012 11:39:00 PM

GREAT FOODS FOR THOUGHT IN YOUR POEM MY DEAR FRIEND, RICHARD. I'LL KEEP IT FOR INSPIRATION. THANK YOU SO MUCH AND YOUR PRECIOUS TIME READING SOME OF MY WORK. MORE GRACES AND POWER TO YOU ALWAYS! hugs:) Leonora

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/4/2012 8:19:00 AM

thanks Leonora,same to you dear

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/3/2012 3:58:00 PM

wonderful poem, Richard, could be a mission statement for the world today....

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/3/2012 5:21:00 PM

hope it does become,thank you very much Harry

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/3/2012 7:36:00 AM

great poem to ponder...I like it..thanks for sharing friend Richard and for dropping by

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/3/2012 5:20:00 PM

ponder,ponder lol,thanks much Maria

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 10/3/2012 7:33:00 AM

Awesome, Richard. Good words. Building a community starts with us. We put forth the materials needed to grow it. It's all coming from us. We can make it big or make it small. We determine our part. It is also our life. Love ya, Toquyen

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/3/2012 5:20:00 PM

thank you very much for the supportive comment,hope we can use poetry and change the world,oxox Toquyen

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 10/2/2012 8:29:00 PM

Richard, Lovely thoughts...Good advice...Some will go in search of this truth! Cynthia

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/3/2012 4:34:00 PM

hope they do,it will bring them a wonderful life,thanks Cynthia

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/2/2012 10:48:00 AM

soulful read that deepens the grooves of one's heart, richard.. wonderful food for the spirit!.. much enjoyed!..:) huggs

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/3/2012 2:27:00 PM

thank you Nette,oxox