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Sweet Surrender

Sweet victory is not won without chaste but love lost and gone you did not leave without haste a surrender was not there without the last breath of victory's fate on that night of the late Love has hope in victory and defeat but it is not won without the discreet the battle will rage were the war drums beat and the battle is below the warriors feet were even the great can have defeat on that night of the late When do you give into war or love will you still be the source for pureness of love can the rage still be tamed without the war there can be no help without the love there can be no hope so do you give in with that sweet surrender or keep pressing on with victories sweet taste on that night of the late By: Kylie Arello a.k.a. ME

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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