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Sweet Surrender

Dawn allures me, but it's the dusk I endure, Darkness, I have fallen in love with, Night has befriended me, The silence of the night says a thousand things, As I gently surrender in its arms. It's the deep night that I long for, When darkness nurses my dreams, Humming the sweetest tune, until dawn unfolds. But I await with fondness for the light to fade, To embrace the dark in all its beauty, I do crave.

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Date: 3/12/2021 3:28:00 PM
Dear Mitali, this is a lovely poem about dusk and darkness. I really think, this is an exceptional poem. I don't see your poems for a while - are you not posting here any more? Looking forward to see more ~ Maladi
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Mitali Saikia
Date: 1/28/2022 7:56:00 AM
Hello Mala di .. it's such a pleasure to see your comment. Thanks so much. Yes, have been busy with my work .. hope to pen down something soon. Trust all is well at your end. Hope to catch-up sometime soon...love and regards.. Mitali

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