Sweet Surrender
She opened her sails in fascination
Spread wide open like angel wings
Her dreams colourful in imagination
Sweet surrender to no particular destination
Oblivious to what her destiny thinks.
Ocean currents dazzled her unexpectedly
Tidal waves choreographed her new sway
She rode the troubled waters, gallantly
Conceding to this new dance, temporally
Because she knew she had no dues to pay.
20-04-2018
3rd PLACE in
Rhyme Time 2 Contest
By Laura Loo
Theme - Sweet Surrender - Two Stanzas
Rhyme - ABAAB CDCCD
Copyright © Natasha Turner | Year Posted 2018
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