Natasha Turner Poet Rhyme

Sweet Surrender

She opened her sails in fascination
Spread wide open like angel wings
Her dreams colourful in imagination
Sweet surrender to no particular destination
Oblivious to what her destiny thinks.

Ocean currents dazzled her unexpectedly
Tidal waves choreographed her new sway
She rode the troubled waters, gallantly  
Conceding to this new dance, temporally 
Because she knew she had no dues to pay.
20-04-2018

3rd PLACE in
Rhyme Time 2 Contest
By Laura Loo
Theme - Sweet Surrender - Two Stanzas
Rhyme - ABAAB CDCCD

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Eve Roper April 25, 2018 at 9:47 PM Congratulations on your win, Natasha, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`* Natasha Turner April 25, 2018 at 11:43 PM Thanks dear Eve :)

James Inman April 25, 2018 at 7:59 AM Surrendering to an open future filled with possibility. What a wonderful surrender it can be. Nice write Natasha. Natasha Turner April 25, 2018 at 1:53 PM Thanks James :) :)

Line Gauthier April 24, 2018 at 8:57 PM Congrats on your fine win, Natasha.

Susan Gentry April 24, 2018 at 5:47 PM This is so good. To be able to enjoy with freedom... congratulations on your placement.

Beautiful Scars April 24, 2018 at 9:02 AM beautifully expressed sweet Natasha congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo Natasha Turner April 24, 2018 at 11:33 AM Thanks dear :)