Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Sweet Surrender

Your hair hints of lavender and lilac:
seductive scents, designed to arouse me.
Like a tease, you tauntingly hold me back;
pinning me down in a playful attack,
laughingly refusing to set me free.

You're a Goddess of beauty and splendor;
with haunting eyes that peer into my soul.
And enjoying your dominatrix role;
I lie back, giving you complete control,
submitting my will to sweet surrender.

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Sam Kauffman February 28, 2023 at 12:13 PM 'Scuse me while I go take a cold shower! Emile, you have composed this with the delicate touch of a lover! Congrats and hats off to you for your first place win! Blessings! Emile Pinet March 1, 2023 at 7:08 AM Thanks, Sam, as always, l welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Merv Hold February 26, 2023 at 3:58 PM Am I allowed say that made me hot? Emile Pinet February 26, 2023 at 5:41 PM Thanks, Merv, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler February 24, 2023 at 6:51 AM So sensual Emile! A wonderful write! Congratulations on your win! :) Emile Pinet February 24, 2023 at 7:52 AM Thanks, Linda, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Margarita Lillico February 24, 2023 at 5:53 AM Beautiful as it’s seductive!!! Congrats!!! Emile Pinet February 24, 2023 at 7:52 AM Thanks, Margarita, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues February 24, 2023 at 5:33 AM Congratulations, Emile! Fills the senses… Emile Pinet February 24, 2023 at 7:51 AM Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Joanna Daniel February 24, 2023 at 3:15 AM Wow! I like the poem and that picture, Emile, congratulations on your trophy win:) Emile Pinet February 24, 2023 at 7:51 AM Thanks, Jo, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2023 at 1:52 AM - Congratulations on your top first place in the contest ... a beautiful poem, Emile :) - hugs Emile Pinet February 24, 2023 at 7:50 AM Thanks, Sunshine, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 10:21 PM Back with more congrats, Emile. Emile Pinet June 3, 2018 at 11:15 AM Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

Susan Gentry May 31, 2018 at 8:21 PM Back to congratulate you for your win again with this beautiful poem. Emile Pinet June 1, 2018 at 8:50 AM Thank you Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues May 31, 2018 at 4:39 PM All the senses in lure. Congrats, Emile! Emile Pinet June 1, 2018 at 8:50 AM Thank you Kim, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper April 25, 2018 at 9:34 PM Congratulations on your win, Emile, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`* Emile Pinet June 1, 2018 at 8:50 AM Thank you Eve, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

James Inman April 25, 2018 at 7:31 AM I like the different take on the theme Emile, very nice. Emile Pinet April 25, 2018 at 9:03 AM Thanks James, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier April 24, 2018 at 8:45 PM Lovely. Congrats on your well deserved win, Emile. Emile Pinet April 25, 2018 at 9:02 AM Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

Jack Cooper April 24, 2018 at 8:07 PM I really like this poem and the way that it just builds momentem.Your rhymes and choice of words well planned, simply delicous from start to finish. Emile Pinet April 25, 2018 at 9:03 AM Thanks so much Jack, your comments have made my day my friend, Emile.

Susan Gentry April 24, 2018 at 5:29 PM Oh my! Congratulations on your win with this sensual poem of surrender. Enjoyed. Emile Pinet April 24, 2018 at 6:21 PM Thank you Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

Beautiful Scars April 24, 2018 at 8:53 AM ooooo love the sensuality! great poem dear Emile...by the way I got your book and am reading it now..love it!!! thank you so much :) congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo Emile Pinet April 24, 2018 at 11:30 AM Thanks so much Laura, I appreciate the placing and hope you enjoy my book my friend, Emile.

Shahid S. April 11, 2018 at 1:35 AM Intense!! Emile Pinet April 11, 2018 at 8:32 AM Thanks Shahid, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.