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Your hair smells of lavender and lilac; seductive scents designed to arouse me. Like a tease, you tauntingly hold me back pinning me down in a playful attack, laughingly refusing to set me free. A Goddess of captivating splendor your haunting eyes peer deep into my soul, And fueling your dominatrix role I lie back, giving you complete control, and submit my will to sweet surrender.

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Date: 2/28/2023 12:13:00 PM
'Scuse me while I go take a cold shower! Emile, you have composed this with the delicate touch of a lover! Congrats and hats off to you for your first place win! Blessings!
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Date: 3/1/2023 7:08:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, as always, l welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/26/2023 3:58:00 PM
Am I allowed say that made me hot?
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Date: 2/26/2023 5:41:00 PM
Thanks, Merv, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2023 6:51:00 AM
So sensual Emile! A wonderful write! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2023 5:53:00 AM
Beautiful as it’s seductive!!! Congrats!!!
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, Margarita, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2023 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations, Emile! Fills the senses…
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:51:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2023 3:15:00 AM
Wow! I like the poem and that picture, Emile, congratulations on your trophy win:)
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:51:00 AM
Thanks, Jo, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2023 1:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top first place in the contest ... a beautiful poem, Emile :) - hugs
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:50:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/2/2018 10:21:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Emile.
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Date: 6/3/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/31/2018 8:21:00 PM
Back to congratulate you for your win again with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 6/1/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/31/2018 4:39:00 PM
All the senses in lure. Congrats, Emile!
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Date: 6/1/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Kim, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Emile, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/1/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Eve, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2018 7:31:00 AM
I like the different take on the theme Emile, very nice.
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:03:00 AM
Thanks James, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2018 8:45:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your well deserved win, Emile.
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2018 8:07:00 PM
I really like this poem and the way that it just builds momentem.Your rhymes and choice of words well planned, simply delicous from start to finish.
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Jack, your comments have made my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2018 5:29:00 PM
Oh my! Congratulations on your win with this sensual poem of surrender. Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/24/2018 6:21:00 PM
Thank you Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2018 8:53:00 AM
ooooo love the sensuality! great poem dear Emile...by the way I got your book and am reading it now..love it!!! thank you so much :) congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2018 11:30:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura, I appreciate the placing and hope you enjoy my book my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/11/2018 1:35:00 AM
Intense!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/11/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Shahid, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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