Sweet Sun

A beautiful bowl
burning to brighten our world ,
lends light to leaves and lilies;
got glee-giving glow.
The nurse of nature at noon!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Malott Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:28 PM
Thank you for your kind words. As I have told others on this site, I am very much a rookie at this kind of thing. I thought at first the article is something Jim Morrison might write for a Doors song if he were alive. It occured to me later that I was decribing me. Putting myself under a microscope is a long time practice but I do appreciate your words.
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Wow wow, beautiful alliteration with lovely thoughts on the blessings of the sun, Adeleke
Rams Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 7:44 AM
you said it correctly in the first line. "bold and beautiful".
Mannan Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 1:24 AM
beautiful tanka with lovely alliteration.
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