Sweet Summer

“Beneath a lover’s moon, sweet summer breezes in.” by Poet 

So softly summer breezes in around mid-June.
Lovers kiss and reminisce, walking in the sand.
Maybe they have wed and are on their honeymoon!
Lovely are such warm evenings walking hand in hand.

Then Summer gently flits from June into July.
Like a butterfly is she, and her wings are bright
and beautiful like fireworks that light up the sky -
a long sweltering day dissolving into night.

Sometime in late August, a sadness sweeps through me.
Though roller-coaster, cotton-candy days abound
along with days of front-porch sitting, sipping tea,
I sense melancholy creeping in the background.

Beneath an autumn moon, sweet summer slips away
in late September, yet sometimes it even seems
to linger on till one Indian summer day -
it waves farewell to me, then hides inside my dreams.

So softly summer breezes in around mid-June.
Then Summer gently flits from June into July.
Sometime in late August, a sadness sweeps through me.
Beneath an autumn moon, sweet summer slips away.

For Brian Strand's the 'ALL YOURS (Feb 10)' Poetry Contest
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La France Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:55 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this excellent poem, I like your quote too _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful summer write. Love your line, "Beneath an autumn moon, sweet summer slips away." Yes, slips away into autumn and cooler days. Enjoy your win with blessings......................
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Love the second verse, Andrea, a soothing, great flowing poem with deep emotions and imagery . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Seeker Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 6:22 PM
Congrats on the top position in the contest, Andrea! Beautifully worded
Edmonds  Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Andrea with this beautiful “sweet summer” poem. Well done... Belle
Y. Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Hi Andrea, I’m coming to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a great day;-) Alexis
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 11:10 AM
I am back to congratulate, Andrea, on your Top Placement for your lovely write!!
Y. Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Hi Andrea, I liked the wonderful imagery you created in this write. Your descriptions of the summer slipping away were so well written. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 11:15 AM
But we really appreciate it when it returns, very well written Andrea. Best of luck in the contest, hope you are well. Tom
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Delightfully rhythmic, Andrea--one of the best entries I have read for this contest.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 11:40 PM
Your poetry is always incredibly beautiful. No doubt it will rate high. ~~
Daniel Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 9:13 PM
Awesome as always, Andrea:) sure to place high:) come to my place, you'll get your fill of summer:)
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 8:36 PM
This is a lovely write on the changes of summer from its early days to the beginning of autumn, and its impact on the narrative persona. I really love how you write that beautifies of summer finally hides in the speaker's dreams. A beautiful write, indeed, Andrea!!
Watt Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Beautifully written, my dear friend! The sense of dread that summer is slipping away even as you sit on the porch sipping tea is an allegory of life slipping us by, and the melancholy that comes even though the days are bright. My favorite line is " it waves farewell to me, then hides inside my dreams." A fave, best wishes in the contest ~ John
Thyst Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 7:13 PM
Sweet poem Andrea. The autumn moon conveys a aura of sweet longing.Goodluck i the contest. _amethyst
Koplin Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Beautifully done Andrea! Very nice.
Bayles Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 6:43 PM
Very nice poem and rhyme, Andrea. Of course I sometimes like reading poems with a touch of love.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 6:42 PM
This is brilliant and a joy to read. I love it. So sweet, soft and soothing. God bless you with a win, my friend
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