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Sweet Spring Souvenirs

Now, Spring an echo of a crazy dance
Its music still wrapping the soul in  trance.

Sweet the taste of a season of pure feel
The scent of which the deepest pain could heal.

The weather of the Heart so fine, so dear
The path of Love, with folded eyes, so clear.

Time, that weighs on my world, in words no will
Hidden powers awake and feed my quill.

Sweet Spring souvenirs freshen mad Summer
Merry flair with the chirps of a hummer.

Summer sun and heat  mould a poet’s mood
Seek fresh breeze in poetic solitude.

Time to seize that soul seasons we create
Dormant wonders inside, help radiate.

Sad silence might stain nature and its flair
See, Life is Harmony within we bear.


Besma
June 12th, 2019

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Funom Makama

September 9, 2019 at 10:20 AM

This is a masterpiece. Your soul is palpable here, a great dish of lines my wonderful friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 10, 2019 at 6:16 PM

My great delight reading your wonderful feedback, Funom! Thank you so much for your graceful presence and support.. My deepest regards and blessings.

M. L. Kiser

July 22, 2019 at 9:00 AM

Beautifully expressed, a smooth, honest read.

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 31, 2019 at 1:25 PM

Thank you so much, M.L. Kiser, for your generosity and kindness.. your words of praise are so much appreciated. Deepest regards and blessings.

Robertina B.

July 1, 2019 at 8:08 AM

Besma, I was in complete awe while reading your exquisite masterpeice.. You penned pure elegance and beauty, my friend.. I enjoyed your outstanding couplet!! This is a definite fav for me.. Your talent shines!! Have a blessed day!

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 3, 2019 at 1:38 PM

What a wonderful praise! How sweet and beautiful is your appreciation! I'm deeply touched and humbled by your generous feedback, Robertina.. thank you so much for your graceful presence and kind words.. my warmest wishes. Blessings.

Robert Lindley

June 28, 2019 at 2:57 PM

Brilliantly written piece my great friend. I especially loved the last two closing verses! A fav, a true beauty..

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 30, 2019 at 1:15 PM

That means a lot to me these words of appreciation and praise coming from you, Robert! A poet of grandeur I highly appreciate.. thank you so much.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Quoth Theraven

June 22, 2019 at 9:54 PM

Besma, The mad Summer has arrived indeed. So nice to read your couplet this eve. -Richard

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 26, 2019 at 4:38 AM

Thank you so much, Richard, for your honouring visit and genuine praise.. deeply humbled and grateful.. my deepest regards. Blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

June 22, 2019 at 7:08 AM

A beautiful and imaginative write dearest Besma - Spring is certainly in the air and your heart soul and reasoning are all in tune with this glorious season, may your creative poetic approach to life always surround you with the Spring of life - blessings dear soul sister, hugs and love, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 26, 2019 at 4:36 AM

Always looking forward to reading your so wonderful a feedback! Blessed I am having you, soul sister, a dearest friend.. a gifted poetess and an ardent reader! Thank you so much, Jenny for the Beauty you bring to my humble soul.. God bless you.. Love and hugs.

Vijay Pandit

June 18, 2019 at 5:15 PM

I am so glad to see this beautiful poem climbing the best poem chart..I knew it was special when I read it the first time and marked it my FAV. Congrats, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 26, 2019 at 4:32 AM

From the bottom of my heart I thank you tremendously for your humility and generosity, dear Vijay.. Your poetic heart and beautiful soul.. your great support and encouragement, so much valued and cherished.. You add a lot of Light and Beauty.. my warmest wishes and regards.. God bless you.

Arturo Michael

June 17, 2019 at 5:33 AM

In this information age it's easy to get confused...harder to balance on the trampoline of life....Lovely message for peace and harmony

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 26, 2019 at 4:27 AM

Thank you heaps, Arturo, for your so beautiful a feedback! I'm so glad you read and liked my humble work.. I highly appreciate your visit and support.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Susan Ashley

June 15, 2019 at 7:59 PM

It is such a pleasure for your avid reader to be immersed in the beauty and depth of your poetic thoughts. Your artistry radiates the fine weather of your heart, the love and light that resides within your expressive soul. The liveliness, wonderment, awakening, inspirational and healing nature of Spring, in the soul season we create, blooms in harmony with your creativity, my dearest soul sister. Your glowing couplets reflect a deep gratitude and joy for 'sweet spring souvenirs'. We possess the power within to be in harmony, to be inspired and create our own joy if we so chose and you remind us of this gift with your rich eloquence. Your poetry fills me with elation and wonder, my lovely friend. A treasured fav! Warmest wishes, love and hugs always, my dearest Besma.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 17, 2019 at 4:15 AM

I thank you heaps, dearest Susan from the bottom of my heart for your grace, love and beauty.. Always a great delight to see you.. my warmest wishes.. my love and hugs.

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 17, 2019 at 4:13 AM

You are a dear soul sister who feels every single pulse of my humble poetry.. dearest Susan, I find an immense pleasure in reading, not a feedback, rather an outstanding and an outshining poetry in response to my work.. Always blessed, honoured and elated to have a dear soul sister.. a great poetess who resonates with my world of words.. who does share the passion for Poesy.. Such beautiful sentiments filling my hear and mind..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

June 14, 2019 at 12:31 PM

A fabulous creative poem radiant with vivid spring imagery wow.! I especially admired the ' weather if the heart' line yay . Kudos and keep writing so wonderfully. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 17, 2019 at 4:03 AM

I'm very glad my humble poem touched your poetic heart! Thank you so much for a beautiful feedback, Zaynab.. warmest wishes. Blessings.

Maria Williams

June 14, 2019 at 5:04 AM

Besma my dearest friend, this is indeed a marvelous work of poetic artistry. The rich vibrant couplets are so beautifully conceived and expressed. These are my favorite 2 lines 'Time to seize that soul seasons we create Dormant wonders inside, help radiate'. Bravo Besma, a gem and a fave always....Maria Hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 14, 2019 at 5:16 AM

Dearest Maria, your sincere and kind words of appreciation and encouragement radiate into my soul! Your positive and rich response and vibration create the sweetest seasons of my soul! Deeply humbled and touched.. thank you heaps from the depth of my heart.. warmest wishes. My love and hugs. God bless you.

Gordon Mcconnell

June 13, 2019 at 3:50 PM

Super spring write Besma, really makes think on the sun and it's balmy effects, I love your rhyme and flow, so effective. Blessings, Gordon

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 14, 2019 at 5:11 AM

Thank you so much, Gordon, for your so much appreciated and beautiful feedback! So kind and generous of you to read and praise my humble work.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

June 12, 2019 at 7:46 PM

Wonderful world of nature and life intertwined in your verses..many lines here to ponder:sweet the taste of a season of pure feel ..the scent of which the deepest pain could heal...and--- the weather of the Heart so fine, so dear the path of Love, with folded eyes, so clear. Quite an inspiring a write this is..well written poem, Besma. I am marking it a FAV to read it again.

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 13, 2019 at 3:57 AM

Thank you so much, dear Vijay, for appreciating and feeling my humble words.. your sincere and generous support is uplifting and elating.. deeply grateful to you for your continuous encouragement to my poetry.. It adds a lot to my inspirations and aspirations.. always an honour and an immense pleasure to read your feedbacks. Be blessed always.

Sweet Spring Souvenirs

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