Sweet Spring Rain

In the gentle morning glow,
Spring rain sighs on petals,
Sweetness in each drop,
Blossoms quiver with delight,
Nature's tender kiss unfolds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 12:21 PM
Hello Don, I think you have eloquently captured the delicate beauty of a spring rain shower with eloquence and grace. The imagery of rain sighing on petals and blossoms quivering with delight evokes a sense of tranquility and renewal. It's nature's gentle touch and the subtle magic that unfolds with each drop. Your words are like a soothing melody, ushering in the sweetness of spring. Blessings, Daniel.
Iannone  Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Hi Daniel, thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem. Based on real experience. Sometimes those provide the best poems. Don
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Sweet!
Iannone  Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Kim!
M  Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Lovely poem Don “spring rain sighs on petals” my favourite line! Debx
Iannone  Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:33 PM
Deb, thank you for reading the poem and commenting. Don
Lawless Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 5:47 AM
AWWW...C'MON.....y'er makin' Spring blush
Iannone  Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:33 PM
Hi John, blush indeed. Thanks for your sense of humor. Don
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