Sweet Spring

Bees
Buzzing
Pollenate
New spring flowers
Combs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 7:54 PM
I am very fond of spring; thus I am very fond of this poem you have so arfully written. Always, Laura
Winter Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 4:58 AM
Such a beautiful Lanterne here. Well, I read it, and it reads like poem in itself! What is there to forgive though? It is certainly beautiful and full of love. Did she respond in any way??? It is very, very sweet. Love you, Shar xoxo
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February 28, 2009 at 10:40 AM
You've left me smiling with this scene. I can't wait for spring! I saw you were on-line. Glad to have you back. Hope you'll be posting some more poetry soon. Have a good day! Karen
Riley Avatar
January 12, 2009 at 7:36 PM
A master of the pen, love to read nature poems of all kind. Wonderful Lanturne, reminds me of the country I miss the bees. Judy Riley
Winter Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 5:19 AM
Beautiful Spring Lanterne! You captured the season so well. Good luck dear brother! Love & hugs, Shar
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January 9, 2009 at 8:55 PM
Nice use of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
Strand Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 12:22 AM
Thanks for supporting my contests HG.Will look up the poem.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments
Burton Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 7:14 PM
its cold here and freezing with rain as well about to move to california or some thing. this poem reminds me of great the weather was at first. enjoyed reading it. have a good day.
Winter Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 5:30 AM
You capture a true feel of Spring. Beautiful write. Good luck! Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 6:24 PM
Great Job HG, I posted a poem for you today. I hope all is well...Rual
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January 5, 2009 at 4:24 PM
Excellent job....Good job in the new contest!! Looks like a winning poem! ~ Carrie
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January 5, 2009 at 3:43 PM
HG, I absolutely love this...good for you..see my soup mail...xliamp Beeg
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