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Sweet Sighs

Morning embraced where the sky meets There within daylights darkened horizon It’s in that place that nature soon seeks Answers to questions making a worthy liaison Thick green summer grass grows undisturbed Awaiting this summers warm restless tears While soft gentle breezes are then detoured Never allowing the option of the days fears Rising to float on the sunlights bright rays Overtaking the night times cool dark skies When the two begin to dance about and play Breathing into each other their sweet sighs 8/12/2020

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/28/2020 9:05:00 PM

Big Congrats Brinda. Title is Excellent.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/28/2020 9:10:00 PM

Anisha thank you so much!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2020 5:00:00 PM

The imagery here is so gorgeous, Brenda! And congrats in the contest.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/16/2020 11:48:00 PM

Andrea thank you so much!;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/15/2020 7:09:00 AM

BIG congrats Brenda on yet another #1 win in Brian's contest.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/16/2020 11:49:00 PM

Vijay you are too kind! Thank you my friend!:)

John Watt

Date: 7/15/2020 12:30:00 AM

Brenda, I enjoyed your musings on daybreak, with 'seasoned' with some lovely summertime nature imagery. Beautiful! ~ John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/16/2020 11:49:00 PM

John thank you so much!;)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/14/2020 2:56:00 PM

Brenda, breathtaking theme . Hugs Eve

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2020 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Eve!;)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/14/2020 12:46:00 PM

You breathe sweet sighs into your breathtaking poetry - congratulations on winning, I am not in the least surprised , a very talented write. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2020 1:54:00 PM

Jennifer and I have missed your visits! Thank you my friend!;)

Bryan Norton

Date: 7/14/2020 11:58:00 AM

Congratulations. I see my high expectations of your poem are justified. Best wishes, Bryan

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2020 12:38:00 PM

Bryan see you may be on to something!;) thx once again!;)

John Gondolf

Date: 7/14/2020 10:28:00 AM

"breathing into each other their sweet sighs" I love this line Bren, it sends my mind drifting in the clouds. Congrats on your win my sweet friend. Hugs, John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2020 10:52:00 AM

Ahhh John thank you so much!;)

Bryan Norton

Date: 7/13/2020 5:51:00 PM

A very evocative and lovely poem. I could sit back and enjoy reading poems like this all day long. You might enjoy my new poem "In London Town."

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/13/2020 5:55:00 PM

Thank you and I will go check it out!;)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/13/2020 3:17:00 PM

You painted a very romantic image Brenda. Tom

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/13/2020 4:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom!;)