Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Sweet Sighs

Morning embraced 
where the sky meets 
There within daylights 
darkened horizon 
It’s in that place that 
nature soon seeks 
Answers to questions 
making a worthy liaison 

Thick green summer grass 
grows undisturbed 
Awaiting this summers 
warm restless tears
While soft gentle breezes 
are then detoured 
Never allowing the option 
of the days fears 

Rising to float on the 
sunlights bright rays 
Overtaking the night 
times cool dark skies
When the two begin 
to dance about and play 
Breathing into each 
other their sweet sighs

8/12/2020

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Anisha Dutta July 28, 2020 at 9:05 PM Big Congrats Brinda. Title is Excellent. Brenda Chiri July 28, 2020 at 9:10 PM Anisha thank you so much!;)

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2020 at 5:00 PM The imagery here is so gorgeous, Brenda! And congrats in the contest. Brenda Chiri July 16, 2020 at 11:48 PM Andrea thank you so much!;)

Vijay Pandit July 15, 2020 at 7:09 AM BIG congrats Brenda on yet another #1 win in Brian's contest. Brenda Chiri July 16, 2020 at 11:49 PM Vijay you are too kind! Thank you my friend!:)

John Watt July 15, 2020 at 12:30 AM Brenda, I enjoyed your musings on daybreak, with 'seasoned' with some lovely summertime nature imagery. Beautiful! ~ John Brenda Chiri July 16, 2020 at 11:49 PM John thank you so much!;)

Eve Roper July 14, 2020 at 2:56 PM Brenda, breathtaking theme . Hugs Eve Brenda Chiri July 14, 2020 at 3:08 PM Thank you Eve!;)

Jennifer Proxenos July 14, 2020 at 12:46 PM You breathe sweet sighs into your breathtaking poetry - congratulations on winning, I am not in the least surprised , a very talented write. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Brenda Chiri July 14, 2020 at 1:54 PM Jennifer and I have missed your visits! Thank you my friend!;)

Bryan Norton July 14, 2020 at 11:58 AM Congratulations. I see my high expectations of your poem are justified. Best wishes, Bryan Brenda Chiri July 14, 2020 at 12:38 PM Bryan see you may be on to something!;) thx once again!;)

John Gondolf July 14, 2020 at 10:28 AM "breathing into each other their sweet sighs" I love this line Bren, it sends my mind drifting in the clouds. Congrats on your win my sweet friend. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri July 14, 2020 at 10:52 AM Ahhh John thank you so much!;)

Bryan Norton July 13, 2020 at 5:51 PM A very evocative and lovely poem. I could sit back and enjoy reading poems like this all day long. You might enjoy my new poem "In London Town." Brenda Chiri July 13, 2020 at 5:55 PM Thank you and I will go check it out!;)

Tom Cunningham July 13, 2020 at 3:17 PM You painted a very romantic image Brenda. Tom Brenda Chiri July 13, 2020 at 4:11 PM Thank you so much Tom!;)