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Sweet Sighs

Morning embraced where the sky meets There within daylights darkened horizon It’s in that place that nature soon seeks Answers to questions making a worthy liaison Thick green summer grass grows undisturbed Awaiting this summers warm restless tears While soft gentle breezes are then detoured Never allowing the option of the days fears Rising to float on the sunlights bright rays Overtaking the night times cool dark skies When the two begin to dance about and play Breathing into each other their sweet sighs
8/12/2020

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Date: 7/28/2020 9:05:00 PM
Big Congrats Brinda. Title is Excellent.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/28/2020 9:10:00 PM
Anisha thank you so much!;)
Date: 7/15/2020 5:00:00 PM
The imagery here is so gorgeous, Brenda! And congrats in the contest.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/16/2020 11:48:00 PM
Andrea thank you so much!;)
Date: 7/15/2020 7:09:00 AM
BIG congrats Brenda on yet another #1 win in Brian's contest.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/16/2020 11:49:00 PM
Vijay you are too kind! Thank you my friend!:)
Date: 7/15/2020 12:30:00 AM
Brenda, I enjoyed your musings on daybreak, with 'seasoned' with some lovely summertime nature imagery. Beautiful! ~ John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/16/2020 11:49:00 PM
John thank you so much!;)
Date: 7/14/2020 7:46:00 PM
Beautifully written, Brenda, congratulations.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/16/2020 11:49:00 PM
Thank you Beth!;)
Date: 7/14/2020 2:56:00 PM
Brenda, breathtaking theme . Hugs Eve
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2020 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Eve!;)
Date: 7/14/2020 12:46:00 PM
You breathe sweet sighs into your breathtaking poetry - congratulations on winning, I am not in the least surprised , a very talented write. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2020 1:54:00 PM
Jennifer and I have missed your visits! Thank you my friend!;)
Date: 7/14/2020 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations. I see my high expectations of your poem are justified. Best wishes, Bryan
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2020 12:38:00 PM
Bryan see you may be on to something!;) thx once again!;)
Date: 7/14/2020 10:28:00 AM
"breathing into each other their sweet sighs" I love this line Bren, it sends my mind drifting in the clouds. Congrats on your win my sweet friend. Hugs, John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2020 10:52:00 AM
Ahhh John thank you so much!;)
Date: 7/13/2020 5:51:00 PM
A very evocative and lovely poem. I could sit back and enjoy reading poems like this all day long. You might enjoy my new poem "In London Town."
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/13/2020 5:55:00 PM
Thank you and I will go check it out!;)
Date: 7/13/2020 3:17:00 PM
You painted a very romantic image Brenda. Tom
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/13/2020 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom!;)