Sweet Seduction- Swap Quatrain

Like summer breeze with sweet caress
 Her beauty does  indeed impress
  And   her dulcet perfume does tease
With sweet caress like summer breeze

In the moonlight my heart flutters
"I love you" is what I utter
Her perfume fills me with delight
My heart flutters in the moonlight

Upon her lips I plant a kiss
'Neath starry skies I am in bliss
As  I caress her lovely hips
I plant a kiss upon her lips

Forevermore she'll be my pearl
A dance of love as hearts do swirl
She's  the one I'll always adore
She'll be my pearl forevermore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 5:53 PM
sweet seduction very sweetly done, Joseph. Congrats for your win in my contest!
May Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:14 PM
Thank you for my placement Andrea
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 10:24 AM
It seems we both have pearls on our mind. Congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, joseph
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 3:06 AM
ohhh, romance and passion!.. ..sweet 'grads on your award, joseph!.. huggs
Kayode Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:36 AM
A great work you did here , congrats Joseph.
Anish Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Mice romantic glow to this work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 6:52 PM
I find these are really a challenge to write and have them flow smoothly. You did a wonderful job of creating a poem that not only flows smoothly but is romantic and filled with enchantment. Bravo Joseph!
Van Breda Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 8:48 AM
I love your style Joseph.. and romantic inclinations ;) This is such a 'love letter'. How fortunate this 'pearl' is to have you xx
May Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 7:33 PM
Thank you Kim...you're a gem...hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 4:39 PM
- A beautiful love poem ....... that smells sweet perfume, Joseph !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 7:30 PM
Thank you Anne
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Joseph you did a good job with this form...David
May Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 7:30 PM
Thank you David
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