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Written: April 2nd, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Quote: "No winter lasts forever, no spring skips its time, and April instills a feeling of freshness so sublime. By Poet" *************** The wildflowers now bear the base lay, Delicate petals dance in a gentle sway. Soft pink, rosy yellow, and a dawn hue, Daisy petals mirror tiny steps in a queue. Bees and feathered creatures soar in the sky, Wafting in between, along a lush garden awry. Emerald with pink cyclamens and a sour hint, By the sweet aroma of cherry blossom tint. Spring grace, so close, I yelled what a season?

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Terry Miller

Date: 4/11/2025 7:38:00 AM

Great poem, fantastic imagery love this line the most" Daisy petals mirror tiny steps in a queue." congratulations

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/9/2025 7:57:00 AM

SP, it is so good it is hard to believe at some times. This is a fun read. Smiles!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/9/2025 6:04:00 AM

Just lovely Las. I especially love "...rosy yellow..." - yellow rose of Texas and all ;) Very colorful. Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/7/2025 12:13:00 PM

- Beautifully described in words and photos, Las :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2025 12:01:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful write again. Have a blessed day with your win...................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/7/2025 9:36:00 AM

Love the subtleness of the question! Lovely write! Congrats!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 4/7/2025 1:42:00 AM

Congratulations, dear poet , on your top placement with a wonderful poem celebrating the colourful beauty of nature. Your poem has such a lyrical rhythm! Wishing you a blessed day.

Jay Narain

Date: 4/3/2025 10:49:00 AM

Poem with great imagery.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/3/2025 1:52:00 AM

Dear sotto, This is stunning and as always the philosophical touch of your poems is evident here too! I love the picture youv used here as well as the quote that is so profound and soulful and the descriptive nature of your lines here truly is impressive and gives an aesthetic vibe! I especially love “ Delicate petals dance in a gentle sway. Soft pink, rosy yellow, and a dawn hue, Daisy petals mirror tiny steps in a queue.” Just stunning! Your use of colors and flowers and more! Best wishes, sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/2/2025 9:59:00 PM

Hi Sotto, you welcome spring with great imagery and joyous emotions. A sure high placement.

Michael Tor

Date: 4/2/2025 4:38:00 PM

Wow Lasaad so much passion and descriptive words and thoughts generating a welcoming spirit and admiration for Spring, and the month of April. Again a winning entry in my humble opinion but added to that a favorite for me for how it made me feel cooped up in the winter months and now being reminded by your lovely words of what's to come. A favorite my friend...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/2/2025 3:03:00 PM

What a lovely/wonderful write with quote. Pretty Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away..................

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/2/2025 1:11:00 PM

Lovely and titillating imagery, Sotto. It's a winner with me ... CayCay