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Sweet Scoundrel Lies

You're so interesting I could listen to you forever... I feel so very lucky you are truly my treasure! I wasn't looking, she walked into my line of vision. Being here with you dear, is truly my best decision. Those pants fit you perfect, you couldn't possibly look better! Yes of course my dear, they look fantastic with that sweater Oh that is so delicious, can I have another bite Yes of course I agree with you, you're absolutely right I was out with buddies, just having some harmless fun. Come here give me a kiss, you know you're my only one For Silent One's Sweet Lttle Lies Contest Written June 22, 2016

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Vera Duggan

Date: 7/2/2016 12:07:00 AM

I really like this one Richard, Peter quite often say's things like this to me and I don't consider them lies, mind you they had better not be LoL. very well written Richard good luck in the contest and take care........Vera

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/9/2016 8:33:00 AM

Hi Vera, sorry for the late reply. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/29/2016 7:10:00 PM

Wow, sweet as sugar scoundrel lies! Very convincing... I like your clever take on the contest, Richard. Best wishes for the contest! 7 Sandra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/30/2016 6:11:00 AM

Thanks Sandra, I appreciate both the visit and the 7.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/29/2016 8:47:00 AM

A 7 for this very slick--uh, I mean SWEET-- poem, Richard. Janice

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/30/2016 6:12:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/28/2016 4:55:00 PM

A script for a movie, great stuff Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/28/2016 6:40:00 PM

I'm looking for a producer! ;0) thanks Harry!

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 6/27/2016 3:06:00 PM

White lies eh! I always wondered what life would be like without them. I'd certainly be in some trouble haha. Great write

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/28/2016 6:42:00 PM

Thanks Kyle, if I'm honest I've told my share of white and not so white lies.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2016 11:26:00 PM

ohh, you snake charmer, rich... i'm sure you have more on your black book, lol... good one!..huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/27/2016 6:53:00 AM

Thanks Nette, glad I can make you laugh. Hugs Rick.

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/26/2016 12:25:00 PM

With those first two lines I almost thought you were talking about me... LOL... PS. Just put up a new poem...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2016 12:29:00 PM

Ok, I'll check it out.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2016 8:02:00 AM

Love the humour here Richard - great final line too ... good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/27/2016 6:09:00 PM

LOL Richard - the crown of 'queen of poop' may not sit well with some , but i am happy to wear it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2016 8:04:00 AM

Coming from comedy royalty I can't understand not receive a better compliment. Thanks Jan.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/26/2016 1:31:00 AM

The title says it all "Sweet Scoundrel Lies" Richard cant lie, he's too nice! I on the other hand..............

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2016 7:49:00 AM

You are no scoundrel my friend. Thanks for the visit.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/25/2016 4:08:00 PM

I feel that this was written with humor in mind and in that light it is clever and amusing Richard. I am sure it will do well in the contest. ; )

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2016 7:50:00 AM

It was Connie, thanks for the visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/25/2016 1:37:00 PM

I do not think you would go even that far dear, Richard! Very well written though! Good luck, my friend!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2016 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios, you are indeed correct.

Mama Bear

Date: 6/25/2016 11:56:00 AM

You sound very believable hope you don't get too good at it in real life. I think it is a winner Good luck Love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2016 2:40:00 PM

Thanks mom, I know if I did I would be answering to you.

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 6/25/2016 11:49:00 AM

This is very funny and very well written x brilliant xxxx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2016 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Wendy.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/25/2016 9:26:00 AM

Oh....that last couplet. Good write, Richard. The couplet form was best suited for this. Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2016 2:42:00 PM

Thanks and a big hug back to you.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/25/2016 9:18:00 AM

Guilty! We tell them everyday but when the truth comes out we have to tell one just a little sweeter. Very fun read, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2016 9:26:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, I appreciate you being the first to comment.