Richard Lamoureux Poet Couplet

Sweet Scoundrel Lies

You're so interesting I could listen to you forever...
I feel so very lucky you are truly my treasure!

I wasn't looking, she walked into my line of vision.
Being here with you dear, is truly my best decision.

Those pants fit you perfect, you couldn't possibly look better!
Yes of course my dear, they look fantastic with that sweater

Oh that is so delicious, can I have another bite
Yes of course I agree with you, you're absolutely right

I was out with buddies, just having some harmless fun.
Come here give me a kiss, you know you're my only one


For Silent One's Sweet Lttle Lies Contest

Written June 22, 2016

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Vera Duggan July 2, 2016 at 12:07 AM I really like this one Richard, Peter quite often say's things like this to me and I don't consider them lies, mind you they had better not be LoL. very well written Richard good luck in the contest and take care........Vera Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2016 at 8:33 AM Hi Vera, sorry for the late reply. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

Sandra Haight June 29, 2016 at 7:10 PM Wow, sweet as sugar scoundrel lies! Very convincing... I like your clever take on the contest, Richard. Best wishes for the contest! 7 Sandra Richard Lamoureux June 30, 2016 at 6:11 AM Thanks Sandra, I appreciate both the visit and the 7.

Janice Canerdy June 29, 2016 at 8:47 AM A 7 for this very slick--uh, I mean SWEET-- poem, Richard. Janice Richard Lamoureux June 30, 2016 at 6:12 AM Ha ha, thanks.

Harry Horsman June 28, 2016 at 4:55 PM A script for a movie, great stuff Richard Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2016 at 6:40 PM I'm looking for a producer! ;0) thanks Harry!

Kyle Kriticos June 27, 2016 at 3:06 PM White lies eh! I always wondered what life would be like without them. I'd certainly be in some trouble haha. Great write Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2016 at 6:42 PM Thanks Kyle, if I'm honest I've told my share of white and not so white lies.

Nette Onclaud June 26, 2016 at 11:26 PM ohh, you snake charmer, rich... i'm sure you have more on your black book, lol... good one!..huggs Richard Lamoureux June 27, 2016 at 6:53 AM Thanks Nette, glad I can make you laugh. Hugs Rick.

Carol Eastman June 26, 2016 at 12:25 PM With those first two lines I almost thought you were talking about me... LOL... PS. Just put up a new poem... Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2016 at 12:29 PM Ok, I'll check it out.

Jan Allison June 26, 2016 at 8:02 AM Love the humour here Richard - great final line too ... good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison June 27, 2016 at 6:09 PM LOL Richard - the crown of 'queen of poop' may not sit well with some , but i am happy to wear it lol:-) hugs jan xx Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2016 at 8:04 AM Coming from comedy royalty I can't understand not receive a better compliment. Thanks Jan.

Arthur Vaso June 26, 2016 at 1:31 AM The title says it all "Sweet Scoundrel Lies" Richard cant lie, he's too nice! I on the other hand.............. Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2016 at 7:49 AM You are no scoundrel my friend. Thanks for the visit.

Connie Marcum Wong June 25, 2016 at 4:08 PM I feel that this was written with humor in mind and in that light it is clever and amusing Richard. I am sure it will do well in the contest. ; ) Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2016 at 7:50 AM It was Connie, thanks for the visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 25, 2016 at 1:37 PM I do not think you would go even that far dear, Richard! Very well written though! Good luck, my friend! Richard Lamoureux June 25, 2016 at 2:39 PM Thanks Demetrios, you are indeed correct.

Mama Bear June 25, 2016 at 11:56 AM You sound very believable hope you don't get too good at it in real life. I think it is a winner Good luck Love Mom Richard Lamoureux June 25, 2016 at 2:40 PM Thanks mom, I know if I did I would be answering to you.

Wendy Rycroft June 25, 2016 at 11:49 AM This is very funny and very well written x brilliant xxxx Richard Lamoureux June 25, 2016 at 2:40 PM Thanks Wendy.

Eileen Manassian June 25, 2016 at 9:26 AM Oh....that last couplet. Good write, Richard. The couplet form was best suited for this. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Richard Lamoureux June 25, 2016 at 2:42 PM Thanks and a big hug back to you.

Daniel Turner June 25, 2016 at 9:18 AM Guilty! We tell them everyday but when the truth comes out we have to tell one just a little sweeter. Very fun read, Richard. Richard Lamoureux June 25, 2016 at 9:26 AM Thanks Daniel, I appreciate you being the first to comment.