Sweet Salt Sanctuary

Swimming is a moment of pure freedom
The water envelopes me
Holding me close like a gentle lover
with each stroke, I let go of the weight
that pressed down on me

The world above fades away
and I am left with the quiet rhythm of the water
In this moment, time loses all meaning
I am suspended between the surface 
and the depths, a fleeting moment of peace
A sense of connection to something greater than myself

The water carries me and I am free
In its embrace, I find my solace
The world may be chaotic but 
in the water, I am at peace

With each breath, I let go a little more
I let go of my fears, my doubts and my worries
I am left with the sensation
of the water against my skin
The feeling of weightlessness
The sense of being alive

Swimming in my sanctuary
My second place of refuge
My moment of freedom in the water
I am me!
Unencumbered and untethered
I swim and I am free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Puckett Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 1:28 PM
Thank you, Angela. A lovely sense of quietness and peace. God bless you.
Elias Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 5:01 PM
Dear John You totally understand. May God bless you too! Thank you kindly for your message.
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