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Sweet Release

Feeling the steel slip thru flesh The event horizon reached There can be no turning back for you The threshold has been breached So now it's fade to black my friend And the final sweet release

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/25/2013 4:53:00 PM
To fade to black with.no turning back.from the moment of death..Very dark poem indeed.
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Date: 7/14/2013 11:56:00 AM
dark disturbing truth, brillant
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Date: 5/21/2013 11:52:00 PM
Slitwrist Theory. its based on the song by 36crazyfists. LOLS
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