Sweet Release

Feeling the steel slip thru flesh
The event horizon reached
There can be no turning back for you
The threshold has been breached
So now it's fade to black my friend
And the final sweet release
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:53 PM
To fade to black with.no turning back.from the moment of death..Very dark poem indeed.
Mitchell Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 11:56 AM
dark disturbing truth, brillant
Calubiran Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 11:52 PM
Slitwrist Theory. its based on the song by 36crazyfists. LOLS
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