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Sweet Refrains

Dawn spills hues of honey-tangerine and leaves its sweet dew on the rose, Sunbeams sweeten the morning, With warm caramel glows A dulcet bird song floats and sugar coats the breeze awakening all the flowers Which give nectar to the bees I sip a cup of coffee As a song my heart retains, The morning is a melody, That comes with sweet refrains. - -

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Date: 2/18/2017 12:21:00 AM
How lovely, Joseph, and sweet too! I love the sounds of the morning...if for Debbie's contest, good luck, and thank you so much for your kind comments and the fave on my Blue Wings poem. I'm always honored and pleasantly surprised when someone places one of my poems with their favorites! Hugs, Rhonda
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Joseph May
Date: 2/18/2017 3:10:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda...it was my pleasure...
Date: 2/17/2017 9:34:00 PM
this is so pretty, Joseph. YOu have a way with sweet words!
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Joseph May
Date: 2/18/2017 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Andrea..with a contest theme called "Just a little bit of sugar' they had to be..:-)
Date: 2/17/2017 1:11:00 PM
I like the imagery that I sense here. Very sweet. ;)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/17/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Moon Flower
Date: 2/17/2017 4:24:00 AM
Loved your sugar write, Joseph, sweet:)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/17/2017 8:03:00 AM
Love your comment Jo, Thanks
Date: 2/16/2017 10:33:00 PM
Hi Joseph, I enjoyed this poem, I can imagine a dawn as you described!
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Joseph May
Date: 2/17/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Arthur

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