Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Sweet Rain

by Michael J Falotico

                                                              Legs that reach the stars..
                                                             Eyes that follow my kisses..
                                                                 Tasting the sweet rain..

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Dawn Mclaughlin May 28, 2011 at 6:31 AM Legs that reach the stars, great ink I love it Smiles :@)

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2011 at 9:22 PM Very unique senryu!!

Carolyn Devonshire May 26, 2011 at 11:27 AM So sensual and romantic, Michael. What an uplifting poem! Tomorrow night I leave for a fishing vacation and will be away for a week. Have a great time while I'm away. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A May 26, 2011 at 10:10 AM Michael,,, wow!... i'm just gonna leave it that way....p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 26, 2011 at 7:31 AM Michael u have a way of making rain romantic and beautiuful my White Knight.. and your Jersey Girl is loving the lines .. hope u and Roseanna enjoy a happy and safe holiday weekend.. u have S.M.luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown May 26, 2011 at 6:42 AM Thank you for sharing the heart of your poetry with us here at Poetrysoup. I enjoyed reading your fasinating poetry this morning and I look forward to reading more of your poetry michael. Love, Carol

Stephen Parker May 25, 2011 at 3:17 PM A scintillating ménage a trois of sensory love. The romantic synchronism is titilating!