Sweet Promise

enchanting
the balmy aroma
of petrichor
in anticipation
of magnolia blossoms



AP: Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Smith Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 6:12 PM
A lovely poem Line. congrats. :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 7:11 PM
Thanks, Gary. Much appreciated.
Gaul Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 5:56 PM
Yes, Line, you can do a lot with few words. If you're clever about it. Which you were. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 7:11 PM
Thank you very much, Greg.
Romios Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 6:05 AM
This short work is quite overwhelming. Panagiota
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 12:49 AM
Ah, this is so "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh".
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Ashley Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 9:40 PM
Oh, this sweet poem is a beauty, Line. Love it! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so much, Susan.
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