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Sweet Potato

Aroma baking
Pleasure making

Peanutbutter cake
Don't want no fake

Souffle' today
Tomorrow no weigh

Cheesecake crumb
Pour me some rum

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Rick Rucker

Date: 12/1/2010 12:38:00 AM

I feel better now, just smelling your baking, or is it the rum? Great work!

Elton Camp

Date: 11/9/2010 8:34:00 AM

What a lot you said in just a few words! Thanks for sharing. Elton

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 11/7/2010 1:34:00 PM

This took me to the kitchen MMMM those wonderful smells.Thank you so much Doris for your kind comment.Teresa

Cecil Hickman

Date: 11/5/2010 6:57:00 PM

one of my treasured dishes and pies for sure,a tribute to wonderful and delicious food,,I always enjoy your comments that are so endearing and richly chosen,I want to Thank You so very much for all your visits and comments on my words,,I have been way to lax on my commenting lately,,I want to let you know how much I enjoy and cherish your visits as well,,Blessings..Cecil

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2010 1:46:00 PM

short and sweet just like that potato!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/3/2010 11:48:00 AM

My family luvs sweet potatoes.. such a great little footle it seems to me Doris ... enjoyed your comment ..made me smile today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/3/2010 10:41:00 AM

Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup Doris. Love, Carol

Chad Wood

Date: 11/3/2010 10:12:00 AM

The audacity of such short pieces always earns my respect. This brevity is full of mysterious depth. Much can be said with only four words. A great write.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/3/2010 9:53:00 AM

AROMA BAKING AND MAKING....PLS DON'T KEEP ME WAITING...FOR THE AROMA IS SO CAPTIVATING...WOW.SO INTERESTING AND WORTHY OF RATING.thanx for the great and simple lines.with love, melody maker.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/3/2010 9:27:00 AM

Doris, Quick but quaint I love it.....Thank you for sharing As always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/3/2010 8:56:00 AM

sweet & to the point! love the simplicity in this & it made me smile-- & thank you for your comments-- I love the word that you chose to best describe you-- JOY-- a very loaded word :) --happy that you chose it :) -- nikko :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/2/2010 8:53:00 PM

Oh yes, they smell sooo good! Cute poem, Doris! Love, Carolyn

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/2/2010 6:30:00 PM

it is sweet indeed,doris.fabiyas

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/2/2010 5:07:00 PM

soft smile and mmmmm good! Light & Love

John Rhinem

Date: 11/2/2010 4:27:00 PM

Smile ~ "Aroma baking and making." ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'My Dear, Precious Doris Culverhouse,' Amid Fragrantly Softened Petals of, 'Beautiful Love;' Sweet Dreams My Dear;" Bye!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 11/2/2010 4:21:00 PM

Smile ~ What an intriguing short poe my dear lady; sounds kind of like a "Thanksgivings" moment of some fashion perhaps; pleasantly baked as, "A Sweetened Poetic Potato" ~ Smile ~ "Hello, 'My Dear Precious & Lovely, Doris Culverhouse!!!'" ~ I hope that "Your Beauty" is doing wonderfully my dear &, "Thank You" for "Your Treasures" stopping by & kind com the other day; always nice to behold "Your Brightness" ~ ....Cont:)

Daver Austin

Date: 11/2/2010 3:51:00 PM

First of all - congrats on your selection this week. Yum, yum. Happy baking. Love, Dave