Notes About The Poem
Just a few thoughts while on vacation..I rose early and went out on the porch for my quiet time...

Sweet Peace

In the early 
morning hour
enjoying earth and hour
even writing in the faint light

The birds speak
Sweet peace here
To all who will listen

I only recognize 
The sound of the Gull
Those that are in flight
Speak to me

Did God program joy 
into their ability to fly?
Do they long each morn
to catch a breeze and sail?
Do they chirp in Joy?

First the Seagulls dot
the sky coming from the south 
headed north..
Then the heavy odd-shaped
Pelicans(that is like the pot calling the kettle black)
fly low over the nearly calm waters
headed to north end of the isle
What if I could join their flight?

Seagulls must be early risers
Out to get the best spots on beach
or to get the best food scattered on shore

Pelicans must be night owls
they fly low like a slow sunrise
taking their time to reach their 
little piece of property up north beach


Now earth and sky seem to meet melting into each other

The moisture laden air seems to saturate my being
What a morning to enjoy God's Good Earth....

Sponsor: Nikko Palmario
Contest: Beyond Earth and Hour Writing Challenge
Hint for saving the earth: Use salt and lemon to clean pots and pans....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Arowolo Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 10:16 AM
Excellent and wonderful piece,Sara...Good job. Congratulations on your super win in this contest....
Brown Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:30 AM
Sara congrats on your win..David
Devonshire Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Amazing description of the seagulls, Sara. Each morning they are the first birds I hear. I think God created seagulls not only to fly, but also to bring us joy. Pelicans are fun to play with and always fly in V-formation here. I like the concept of the earth and sky "melting into each other." Best wishes in Nikko's contest! Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:49 AM
beautiful write, my friend - good tip too, will try that
Collins Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Thanks for taking me to the beach and the sky. Kathy
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