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Sweet parakeets, an ardent couple make- at peace together in their cozy cage. Each other's company they both partake- and with a kiss, to show their love, engage. At peace together in their cozy cage- one wouldn't think emotion they could share. But yes, they do- as both of them assuage the comfort of a love that says they care. One wouldn't think emotion they could share; each other's company they both partake the comfort of a love that says they care! Sweet parakeets, an ardent couple make. May 20, 2021 ~1st Place~ Contest: Pantoum Rhyme Sponsor: Eve Roper Judged: 06/24/202 Image #2

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Date: 7/17/2021 12:26:00 PM
they are always more content when they are two, nicely done Sandra congrats on your win !
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Date: 6/27/2021 9:47:00 AM
Sandra, you have met this pantoum challenge with a wonderful rhymed poem about parakeets. Congratulations! Carol Louise
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:13:00 PM
Wow! congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent... and your amazing poetic style in expressing the parakeets' relationship is a proof. God bless you.
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Date: 6/24/2021 1:44:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Sandra. <3 Eve
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Date: 6/24/2021 12:20:00 PM
The transposition of the picture into words, adding a human touch, was exceptionally well-done, Sandra, my compliments on your win my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:56:00 AM
A beautifully written work. Picturesque. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/20/2021 12:12:00 PM
A very sweet, well-written pantoum so descriptive of the picture you chose. Nice work!
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