Sweet Nothings

“The kids are fast asleep,” Bob whispers to
			his wife.” Ann smiles and mouths, “That’s great.” They go
			to get some snacks and drinks before they start
			a movie, with the volume set quite low.

			It’s chilly, so she whispers, “Honey, hand
			me that fleece throw? Come closer; we can share.”
			They watch and cuddle, sip and munch, and laugh
			about the silly movie but don’t dare

			get loud. They must not wake the kids. This is
			their time to be alone. Then halfway through
			the show, he whispers something in her ear.
			She says, "I love you, Babe." They hurry to

			turn lights and TV off—the second half
			can wait. They’ve better things to do! Each time
			he whispers those sweet nothings in her ear,
			she knows the night they share will be sublime.


April 1, 2018, entered in the Heidi Sands Love Poem Contest

November 17, 2018, entered in Lewis Raynes's Sexy Contest
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 1:16 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janice.
Gentry Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 2:45 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful dialogue poem of love. I enjoyed it.
Canerdy Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Thank you so much, Susan! Janice
Sands Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Janice. Congratulations for your win :)
Canerdy Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thank YOU, Heidi! Janice
Barden Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 2:32 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Janice - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Canerdy Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thanks so much, Greg! Janice
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 5:51 PM
What a sweet romantic poem Janice, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 6:51 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:24 PM
Ah... recognized a winner. Congrats, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 7:16 AM
THANK YOU, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 10:05 AM
That's sweet, Janice. Good luck with the contest.
Canerdy Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 11:01 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:22 AM
You captured the mood well--whispers did their work--well written, best for a win, Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
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