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Sweet Night With the Wind

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The Fates are a group of three weaving sister goddesses who assign individual destinies to mortals at birth.

At dropping of night comes the wind, bringing sweet dreams filled with magic, until I awake with the morning. The bright light of morning displaces the wind; all dreams disappear, and the magic. Why does loss of that magic give such grief in the morning? Oh, return sweet night with the wind. How sweet is that wind at night with the magic; Sisters, please unweave the morning.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 8:32:00 AM

Well done

Chetta Achara
Date: 10/24/2023 9:04:00 AM

Thank you

John Lawless

Date: 10/23/2023 5:52:00 AM

I haven't read many of the Tritina form but this one captured me and the line "Oh, return sweet night with the wind." called me to read it several times. Nicely done Chetta.

Chetta Achara
Date: 10/23/2023 6:36:00 AM

Thank you. It was a bit of a challenge to write, but also fun.