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Inspired by a poem of Nette's. ty Nette

Sweet Music

When you hear the gentle notes that seduce
or the crashing chords that vibrate 
leaving your hairs standing on end
and goose bumps  adorn your skin.

The sweet melody of a mouth organ
mingling with sharp piano notes.
The screeching notes of violins 
harmonising with the wind pipes.

The tenderness that entices
and enhances as a fiddlers
fingers and bow fly entrancingly
all coming together as a whole.

The husky croon of a singer
melding with spine thrilling chords.
This and oh so very much more
is the sheer enchanting perfection. 

Surely music is indeed soul food
the bass guitar throbbing 
deep inside, whilst heaven wards
the rumbling rhythm soars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:29 PM
hey, shadow. Came to see if you had any new ones up but don't have time to look thru your oldies. This really may be my last time here till Sunday. Wish me luck getting to Memphis. I kind of doubt joe will do it for me, take me to see Graceland, and in that case, I will be back here tomorrow night!!
Austin Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 7:49 AM
"The screeching notes of violins" Ouch! Stravinsky maybe? You are definitely a music lover and in every facet. Enjoyed. Love, daver
Hamilton Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:30 AM
ty Daver yes I am I like to follow good undiscovered bands or solo artists hugs
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 10:55 PM
what wonderful imagery about different kinds of "music" ranging from the human voice to the instruments of fiddle and guitar. Indeed, a sweet poem about sweet music.
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 3:59 PM
ty Andrea hugs
La France Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Shadow, this is outstanding, a beautiful write 7 and I want to thank you for my wonderful placement in your Any old poem contest, I am honored
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:44 PM
ty Connie it was a great poem hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Thanks for sharing the music Shadow!
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:43 PM
ty Rick hugs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 1:46 AM
Shadow, I am lover of music and your poems rings to my ear melodiously.. ='0 excellent pen! =') !~Olive eloisa
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:43 PM
ty Olive hugs
Sietesantos Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:27 PM
This is sooo beautiful... music feeds the soul in so many ways and you have so charmingly crafted this piece with awesome imagery. It deserves a solid "7!" Pandita
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:42 PM
ty Pandita hugs
Pinet Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 8:42 AM
This is great, playing with words and concepts like a musical instrument charming the reader with your talent and wit as you reveal the heart of music. Emile
Hamilton Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 9:47 AM
hi Emile ty so much dear friend I have not been on much recently due to sorting out my poems for my new book "Wistful Thoughts" am still catching up with fav poets like yourself hugs
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 8:39 PM
wonderful write , shadow, a 7. still have not being able to find your book. Visions In Poetry” By Shadow Hamilton ISBN 078-0-85781-1 hugs eve
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 10:47 PM
ty Eve will soup mail you hugs
Leake Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Nicely Written Shadow, I love music, so all this has great meaning to me. Beautifully done. Best Wishes Kevin
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 2:59 PM
ty Kevin nice to see you hugs
Devnath  Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 12:10 PM
Oh! nice poem to hear music that is food of Soul indeed whilst heaven wards rumbling rhythm soars. Beutiful expression my lovely friend. A 7 indeed. Loved always,bl
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 3:00 PM
ty Bl hugs
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