Sweet Morning's Dew

Bare feet in the grass,
wet from the sweet morning's dew.
I venture out to greet the dawn
and walk towards the view.

Above the mountains there bursts
orange and red, the dawn,
rising like a phoenix
... and now the night is gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 12:25 AM
Congrats Francine on an outstanding win luv.. wonderful words..
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 11:40 PM
Really pretty, Francine. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Ramage Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 10:56 PM
Again another beautiful poem, its like a word photograph. I can see the sunrise. Congratulations on your win, well done. Lee
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Congratulations on your wonderufl win!!!!!!!=============Lori
Poet Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 3:19 PM
A sweet refreshing poem here Francine.Congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 11:31 AM
CONGRATS FRANCINE ON YOUR BIG WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV..
Brown Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Francine. Love,Carol
Williams Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 4:09 AM
Francine congrats on your win, sounds like you have a fantastic view..David
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September 9, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Francine. Good luck in the contest. Kim
Johnson Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 3:54 AM
bare foot girl walks on the grass, the sun is barely rising, a little smile does crease her face, just a we bit of smiling:) love it
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