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- Sweet Moon -

Silver sprinkle moving across the dreams
     Silhouetted by the moon
     O ... such a peaceful night





     13.04.2015 A-L Andresen :)
     Kimo : three lines of 10, 7, and 6 syllables
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moonnaturenightkimo

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Eve Roper

July 14, 2018 at 8:21 PM

Lovely and well crafted write . Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 15, 2018 at 8:50 AM

- Thank you so much Eve, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

March 9, 2018 at 1:18 PM

A very expressive poem, Anne-Lise. Love the moon imagery. Nicely done. Love and smiles always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 9, 2018 at 1:23 PM

- Look at the moon, Freddie .... it's yours and mine :) -Thanks for visiting and comment, always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maricris Cabrera

May 10, 2017 at 12:03 AM

Nice form and write, Sunshine Smile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2017 at 12:44 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, Maricris :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Precioso Tano

May 8, 2017 at 1:55 PM

Lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 8, 2017 at 2:10 PM

- Thank you, Precioso :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski

April 14, 2016 at 9:12 PM

Such a beautiful write Anne, meditative even and also Zen like.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 15, 2016 at 5:23 AM

- Happy you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Lenny :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian

June 10, 2015 at 2:19 PM

I love the moon when sun is setting, s great write, Thanks for your support on my poems the one titled your for me is a little song/chorus Thank you Anne lies you have journeyed through my poems since I first came to poetry soup, and you are familiar with life trying to kick me down and seeing God pick me back up and how things have changed for the better every time..

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 10, 2015 at 2:33 PM

- It's great that you have faith in God !!! - But it is important to believe in yourself too, Diane - You and I are part "of earth puzzle" .... without you ... the picture be missing an important piece !!! - Do not let anyone "tramp" you down !!!! - - Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Diane :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sharon Gulley

May 26, 2015 at 1:30 PM

Such a wonderful Sweet Moon Anne....Sharon G.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 26, 2015 at 1:41 PM

- Thank you, Sharon :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Waldrop

May 8, 2015 at 11:59 PM

That would be the perfect night for a ham-mick, the one you love, light conversation, and soft kisses. That was my first thought after reading this poem. Anne I loved the poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 9, 2015 at 5:44 AM

- Always nice with positive visits and comments, thank you David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Runyan

May 8, 2015 at 6:16 PM

This is really good. So much said in so little words. Loving it

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 9, 2015 at 5:44 AM

- Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Janet :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Archana Garg

May 3, 2015 at 9:04 AM

Very beautiful write.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 3, 2015 at 12:57 PM

- Thank you, Archana :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

April 24, 2015 at 4:02 PM

Wow! What a feeling of contentment and peace you evoked with only three lines!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 24, 2015 at 4:34 PM

- Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Monterey :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jill Spagnola

April 22, 2015 at 3:58 AM

nice alliteration in verse. thank you for the welcome. I can draw from your seeming serenity. Jill

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 22, 2015 at 4:03 AM

- Moon a quiet night ..... gives an inner peace :) - Thank you for really nice visit and many friendly comments from you Jill - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vincent Flannery

April 21, 2015 at 3:07 PM

Enjoyed much! Very serene and yes peaceful. Great job!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 22, 2015 at 3:06 AM

- Thank you, Vincent :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

April 17, 2015 at 3:46 PM

An awesome write on this Kimo. Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 18, 2015 at 10:47 AM

- Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Phyllis :) - Thank you:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

April 17, 2015 at 8:49 AM

The sky is a beautiful and changing canvas. It is nice that there are people who appreciate this art form.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 17, 2015 at 8:58 AM

- I think it's my third Kimo - I really love to write them - Getting "said much on three lines" :)) - Thank you for really nice visit and many friendly comments from you Duke - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

April 17, 2015 at 2:24 AM

Congratulations Anne - Lise on this stunning Kimo. A Fav!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 17, 2015 at 2:27 AM

- Glad you enjoy it :) - Thanks for the congrats and a fav :) - I wish you a great day and a relaxed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

April 16, 2015 at 9:06 AM

Very beautiful descriptive write. Congratulations for Poem of the Day. Blessings and hugs sweet friend Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2015 at 9:25 AM

- Thanks for the congrats, dear Eve ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

April 16, 2015 at 5:05 AM

Lovely imagery in this fine Kimo Anne-Lise. Big congratulations on it being chosen POTD my friend! Hugs, Connie 7

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2015 at 5:25 AM

- Thanks for the congrats, dear Connie ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

April 16, 2015 at 4:03 AM

I loved this kimo, Anne. Peaceful, serene, beautiful scene. Congrats on your POTD! Hugs! Kim :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2015 at 4:14 AM

- Thanks for the congrats, dear Kim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2015 at 2:47 AM

Beautiful. Well penned. Hugs and kissesxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2015 at 4:15 AM

- Ravi, thanks for visiting and comments, always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mary Diliberto

April 15, 2015 at 9:01 PM

makes me feel peaceful just reading it

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2015 at 4:16 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, Mary - thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Lewis Holmes

April 15, 2015 at 6:41 PM

A pleasant poem Anne...Peter.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2015 at 4:16 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, Peter - thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper

April 15, 2015 at 5:08 PM

A beautiful kimo Anne-Lise, So soft and dream like. Congratulations on POTD, it is well deserved with this work. Hope you are well. love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2015 at 4:18 AM

- Glad you enjoyed my "Sweet Moon" kimo, Shane - Thanks for the congrats! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake

April 15, 2015 at 3:58 PM

Really beautiful Anne, Well written God Bless Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2015 at 4:17 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, Kevin - thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

April 15, 2015 at 2:34 PM

Back to congratulate you on POD....Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 15, 2015 at 2:56 PM

- So kind of you, my friend Tim :) - Thanks for the congrats ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

- Sweet Moon -

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