Sweet Moment

A touch of cool breeze
Flutters the leaves
In a wind chime’s beat
I could smell the sweet,
Lilac blooming nearby
As spring gives a sigh,
My soul takes a leap
Wishing I could keep
This moment now,
Time will soon endow

Heidi Sands

5/27/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 5/28/2018 1:17:00 PM
A spring's poetic breeze that caresses the soul dearest, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 1:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios! :)
Date: 5/28/2018 11:07:00 AM
Wonderful spring poem Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 5/28/2018 10:10:00 AM
Well done my friend. You indeed have a sense of beauty.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Carlos :)
Date: 5/28/2018 7:46:00 AM
A lovely spring poem, Heidi, I enjoyed it. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thank you John. It is great to hear you enjoyed it :)
Date: 5/28/2018 5:42:00 AM
ohh, so melodious is this piece , compact in its brevity, heidi... enjoyed much!... huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Nette. I am happy you enjoyed it :)
Date: 5/28/2018 4:29:00 AM
Breathtaking and brilliant verse. So simply fantastic. -JWE
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so much JWE
Date: 5/28/2018 12:04:00 AM
Very sweet, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Subimal :)
Date: 5/27/2018 4:21:00 PM
Simple beautiful!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 5/27/2018 1:16:00 PM
A wonderful rhyme, Heidi.. Terrific imagery!! Enjoyed it..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Robertina. I am happy to hear you enjoyed it :)
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