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Sweet Moment

A touch of cool breeze Flutters the leaves In a wind chime’s beat I could smell the sweet, Lilac blooming nearby As spring gives a sigh, My soul takes a leap Wishing I could keep This moment now, Time will soon endow Heidi Sands 5/27/18

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/28/2018 1:17:00 PM

A spring's poetic breeze that caresses the soul dearest, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 1:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Demetrios! :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/28/2018 11:07:00 AM

Wonderful spring poem Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 11:24:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Lunita Blanca

Date: 5/28/2018 10:10:00 AM

Well done my friend. You indeed have a sense of beauty.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 10:19:00 AM

Thank you Carlos :)

John Gondolf

Date: 5/28/2018 7:46:00 AM

A lovely spring poem, Heidi, I enjoyed it. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thank you John. It is great to hear you enjoyed it :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2018 5:42:00 AM

ohh, so melodious is this piece , compact in its brevity, heidi... enjoyed much!... huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Nette. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 4:29:00 AM

Breathtaking and brilliant verse. So simply fantastic. -JWE

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 7:42:00 AM

Thank you so much JWE

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/28/2018 12:04:00 AM

Very sweet, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2018 7:42:00 AM

Thank you Subimal :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/27/2018 4:21:00 PM

Simple beautiful!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2018 4:26:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)

Robertina B.

Date: 5/27/2018 1:16:00 PM

A wonderful rhyme, Heidi.. Terrific imagery!! Enjoyed it..

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2018 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Robertina. I am happy to hear you enjoyed it :)