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Sweet Memories

Dazzling rainbows in a cloud ridden mind The elusive spectrum of varying wavelengths Appearing after a sunny drizzle of happy episodes

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Date: 12/5/2021 1:54:00 AM

That last line "Appearing after a sunny drizzle of happy episodes" brings an incredible excitement to this poem.

Date: 12/3/2021 3:08:00 AM

That rainbow appears after the rain--a sign of hope emerging through life's clouds.

Valsa George
Date: 12/3/2021 4:28:00 AM

Yes, through life's clouds, sifts sunny rays creating a rainbow of hope. Thank you Vijay !

Date: 12/3/2021 2:19:00 AM

Beautiful verse. I will not take anything of yours but I could have written a poem entitled A Drizzle of Happy Episodes. Maybe you should do it.

Valsa George
Date: 12/3/2021 4:26:00 AM

Definitely that would be great ! I look forward to your poem entitled A Drizzle of Happy Episodes. Thank you so much Victor !