Sweet Lovely Gal

Sweet lovely gal, where do you live?
Your match brings all his love to give,
He restless combs all the little lanes
Looking for your cute worry-stained face;
He’s sworn his rib to ceaselessly trace
For of all his high goals only this remains.

Two rolling stones hardly coincide
And two circling birds seldom collide;
So stop your movement sweet lovely gal
And let your roaming lover find his way
To the chambers where you brood all day;
And you will get your caring and loving pal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Scott Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 10:50 AM
How beautiful this poem reads. Your search for that lovely pal!!! Just flawless!!! 7
Mumo Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 1:10 PM
Thanks dear. I promise to look at your poems first thing tomorrow...I'll keep my promise dear. Love~Hannington.
Rose Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Thank you for your review of my work. I enjoyed this poem. It is clever, tells the story beautifully and the rhyme is precise. Keep penning!
Hunjeri Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 6:43 AM
I like "Two rolling stones hardly coincide And two circling birds seldom collide;" lovely write! I enjoyed
Curtis Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 6:06 AM
This is a beautiful piece with lots of feeling ,my friend
Hopper Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 5:53 AM
Good morning! Nice write! Thanks for sharing!
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