Sweet Love O' Mine

I bought a burger yesterday
It was very dry like the seagull bay
I pilled a lot of ketchup on it
and still dry it remained
I was very dissappointed
as i look at the dry damned thing
I ran to the toilet
and let out a HUGE
BLEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHH
As chunks of the dry burger fell out of my pie hole
Landing into the toilet
Making dookie plop noizes
I'm done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tsiluma Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Ha! Talk about frustration! Nicely done Demi!
J.T. Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 11:58 PM
you have painted that mental picture well - JH
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Welcome you to the P-Soup Demi. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well - I like this poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 23, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Demi,,, nice seeing you try out some haikus... xox...pd
Brown Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:57 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Demi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I hope you never get one of those burgers again. Love, Carol
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