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Sweet Love O' Mine

I bought a burger yesterday It was very dry like the seagull bay I pilled a lot of ketchup on it and still dry it remained I was very dissappointed as i look at the dry damned thing I ran to the toilet and let out a HUGE BLEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHH As chunks of the dry burger fell out of my pie hole Landing into the toilet Making dookie plop noizes I'm done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/31/2012 12:21:00 PM
Ha! Talk about frustration! Nicely done Demi!
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:58:00 PM
you have painted that mental picture well - JH
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Date: 10/24/2012 11:20:00 AM
Welcome you to the P-Soup Demi. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well - I like this poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:51:00 PM
Demi,,, nice seeing you try out some haikus... xox...pd
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Date: 10/23/2012 5:57:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Demi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I hope you never get one of those burgers again. Love, Carol
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