Sweet Kisses

Sky Twilight Starry Scenery Love as a Ignition with Ardent fire Burning hearts fiercely Steaming with passion Assuaging thirst Buried and calmed Sweet kisses Lovers taste Candied Flower Coat Sky twilight starry scenery, love as a ignition with ardent fire Burning hearts fiercely steaming with passion, assuaging thirst Buried and calmed sweet kisses, lovers taste, candied flower coat. Reversed Coat flower, candied taste lovers kisses, sweet calmed and buried Thirst assuaging passion with steaming fiercely hearts, burning Fire ardent with ignition as a love scenery, starry twilight night. For Backwards Poem First Place Sponsored by Laura Loo 7-28-2016

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Laura Leiser

Date: 8/16/2016 2:41:00 PM

So romantic, Nayda! Congrats on your win:)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/31/2016 8:18:00 PM

Thank you Laura

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2016 2:16:00 PM

many congrats Nayda you wrote a great poem in this difficult form:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/31/2016 8:17:00 PM

Thank you Jan

James Inman

Date: 8/16/2016 12:39:00 PM

Difficult write for me, Nayda, well done.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/16/2016 12:57:00 PM

Thank you James.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/16/2016 11:30:00 AM

Nayda, so beautiful with wonderful flow. I loved the theme and I love the word "twilight" lol congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/16/2016 12:57:00 PM

Thank you Laura. An excellent contest. Congratulations to all the winners.

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 7/28/2016 1:24:00 AM

Nicely done.....good luck in the contest!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/28/2016 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Meenakshi