Sweet Kisses

Sky 
                                      Twilight 
                                       Starry
                                      Scenery 
                                     Love as a
                                    Ignition with 
                                     Ardent fire
                              Burning hearts fiercely 
                              Steaming with passion 
                                 Assuaging thirst 
                                Buried and calmed
                                    Sweet kisses 
                                    Lovers taste
                                      Candied 
                                       Flower 
                                        Coat

Sky twilight starry scenery, love as a ignition with ardent fire 
Burning hearts fiercely steaming with passion, assuaging thirst
Buried and calmed sweet kisses, lovers taste, candied flower coat.

Reversed

Coat flower, candied taste lovers kisses, sweet calmed and buried
Thirst assuaging passion with steaming fiercely hearts, burning
Fire ardent with ignition as a love scenery, starry twilight night.

For Backwards Poem
First Place
Sponsored by Laura Loo
7-28-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Leiser Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:41 PM
So romantic, Nayda! Congrats on your win:)
Negron Flores Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Thank you Laura
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:16 PM
many congrats Nayda you wrote a great poem in this difficult form:-) hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Thank you Jan
Inman Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Difficult write for me, Nayda, well done.
Negron Flores Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Thank you James.
Scars Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Nayda, so beautiful with wonderful flow. I loved the theme and I love the word "twilight" lol congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Laura. An excellent contest. Congratulations to all the winners.
Raina Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 1:24 AM
Nicely done.....good luck in the contest!
Negron Flores Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Meenakshi
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