Sweet Jane

Sweet Jane, 

The essense of euphoria, cloud 
of confusion 
Fooled by your seductions, 
indulge in delusion 
You betray me, 
Trading blissful thoughts you 
gave me, for Will 
My best friend I knew forever, 
and still 
Eyes Bloodstained in pain, and 
raging until 

Sweet Mary, 

You carried me away from fury, 
from Ill, 
in the moment, 
Take Me 
To the time I spent with you, 
dimes I spent on you, 
In anguish, when the pollute 
clears, I can see and hear, 
but only to know, the time I've 
wasted 
years we've embraced, 
Monopolized my night and day 
for your own snakish 
intentions.. 

What Trickery.. 
Though, instead of resistence 
and bickering, 
I kiss your wet lips, as you dry 
mine 
The Stress lifts, 
Self-realization hits, 
the cause of anxiety, and mass 
ambition 
The Irony, 
Our relationship seems to be 
teeming/teaming with irony 

You Stand for rebellion, but you 
enslaved me 
Through, at first through lustful 
gazing, 
Set akindle blushes to your 
face, 
and to my amazement, 
Through pre-adolescent stages, 
and justifications, 
Became an arranging of a 
forbidden engagement, 

Between a boy and lady, 
Manipulative of love and time.. 

A Boy's mind.. 

..One last time... 

I Say, 
After I set Astray, 
To count the days, before I 
greet, 

Mary Jane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 5, 2016 at 2:59 AM
DEVIN...;) SKAT
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April 22, 2016 at 10:54 AM
nice to read this one again Devin... linda
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November 28, 2013 at 7:29 PM
Hum, this reminds me of my old sweeten days. The way love snuck up on me with a young heart. All I have to say it was not meant to be. Awesome first poem... Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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November 27, 2013 at 4:02 PM
Thank you very much, everyone. I am glad to be apart of such a welcoming community. As of the poem, it elaborates a difficult time in my life. It has many themes, as it may incorporate many metaphors...or may not, I just wanted to say, because most do not catch it.
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November 27, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Devin, You rocked me with your first poem, . Enjoy your stay with us as a family
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November 27, 2013 at 8:53 AM
Welcome to P-Soup,very beautifully written.
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November 27, 2013 at 3:05 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Devin ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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November 26, 2013 at 7:08 PM
I love it all for a first poem, Devin , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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