Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Rhyme

Sweet Home

Mother blows conch shell
                                       Dews  on holy basil drip smell
                                         Sun vermilion in sky day shy	
                                      Cows return, father chants Om,
                                      Peace all over home sweet home

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Sara Kendrick May 24, 2015 at 3:30 PM This winner does speak of a homey comfort..I enjoyed reading this winner.Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2015 at 1:18 AM Rajat, Nice win...... LINDA

Skat A May 20, 2015 at 7:09 PM Rajat, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. Enjoyed your Home Sweet Home Entry. Thank you for supporting my contest. ~~SKAT LOVE~~

Ana Espinola Collins January 31, 2015 at 10:01 AM A wonderful poem Rajat....nice flow of words. :) Ana

Kelly Deschler January 30, 2015 at 1:52 AM A very nice description of the serene comforts of home... Well done, Rajat. Good luck in the contest! Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 31, 2015 at 7:32 AM It is a traditional welcome of evening in any typical Hindu Bengali home in rural Bengal.Blowing conch-shell, watering holy basil plant, welcoming cows, chanting mantras/hymns to evening God etc. Nice comments Kelly.God bless you. Love>your friend

Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 3:42 PM lovely rhyme:-) Hugs Jan x Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 31, 2015 at 7:27 AM Nice comments Jan. Love

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2015 at 2:09 PM this is really nice!! Nice and homey. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 31, 2015 at 7:27 AM Thank you sweetie

Poesy Relish January 29, 2015 at 11:46 AM A very short poem that speaks a lot... well penned friend...nad Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 29, 2015 at 12:07 PM Nice comments Nad. Thank you my lovely friend. God bless you.Your friend Rajat