Sweet Heartache

Aching as the dim light awakens me.
If only hearts were larger than the mind.
Bleeding for what will never be.

At days end, wrenched to pieces that are key
To having sweet release from what I find.
Aching as the dim light awakens me.

Stained, my love unfit with appetency;
Seeking sweet release; faltered faith in mind.
Bleeding for what will never be.

Dancing in the fire of illicit plea;
willfully chastised for pretending blind.
Aching as the dim light awakens me.

Bound by chafing chains, perpetually;
Suffering, by my hand, for that which binds.
Bleeding for what will never be.

Beating through the ache, marked to set me free;
Quelled by unwholesome thoughts and intertwined.
Aching as the dim light awakens me.

Torturing every fiber of my being;
Stabbing with ferocity redesigned.
Bleeding for what will never be.

Faint, and dying still, mind and heart agree;
Forever bound within these chains I’ll be.
Aching as the dim light awakens me.
Bleeding for what will never be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Inka Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 5:24 AM
Nice work, I enjoyed reading, Hopefully this suffering is not eternal.
Moreno Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Jennifer, congratulations on making the first round of the contest, best of luck...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 4:17 PM
Interesting use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Sheart Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 3:58 PM
Congrats!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Jennifer. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jennifer. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 9:40 AM
Congrats Jennifer on your villanelle "Sweet Heartache" being featured. Vince
Tugaff Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 1:31 PM
Sad but very beautiful and inspiring poetry. Congratulations. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 2:10 PM
sad with a lot of feeling and a beautiful write.
Jordan Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 7:16 AM
Jennifer - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
Steadman Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 5:50 AM
i really like this poem an awful lot...very well written piece!...Luke
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