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Distended cheek Like a chipmunk Filled with acorns Only 'tis Bob's round, sweet, soft peppermint
Gogyohka--A Poetry Form 1. It is short, based on Haiku and Tanka 2. Five lines or sometimes 4 or 6(exceptions) 3. At least one phrase or breath per line 4. No restraints on number of words or syllables 5. Theme unrestricted

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Date: 11/16/2022 12:41:00 PM
so cute!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2022 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Sara
Date: 11/14/2022 7:24:00 AM
I love my soft peppermints. :-) Sweet poem, Sara. Enjoy your day, Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2022 2:11:00 PM
Bill, Those peppermints are a sweet treat for sure just have to no overindulge in my situation. Your comments always encourage me . Sara
Date: 11/14/2022 6:33:00 AM
Sara, you have written a piece that is quite sweet. I really like the feelings all the way through.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2022 2:08:00 PM
I like your play on words, Lasaad. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 11/14/2022 1:17:00 AM
Lovely poem. Short and sweet.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2022 3:55:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Love the humor in the lines of your comment. Sara
Date: 11/13/2022 8:24:00 PM
Wow, i'm learning here, Sara, A chipmunk changes his diet. All that sugar too'. Love it. Harry
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2022 3:53:00 AM
Yes, pure sugar. Only the chipmunk is me. LOL..Thanks for the visit and kind review. Sara

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