Sweet Ghost Valentine

An old house I am led to -it is the symbol of Memories in cobwebs - like those of old lost love. A storehouse for so many things buried in my mind. I open up its creaking door to see what I might find. Lovely notes come waaftng down its stairs to me. My poor heart tears to hear that poignant melody. It brings to me the image of one afternoon When I walked with someone in summer by the dune. I listen to the tickling of the ivory Picturing two people splashing each other by the sea. The music now is drifting to me soft and low. I see the setting sun. We’re bathed in crimson glow. Beautifully and slowly the notes keep being played. In the arms of my old love rhythmically I’m swayed. The keys of the piano now are pounding fast. In the moonlight he and I are making love at last. Finally the keys are played as if they were caressed. And a bitter sweetness swells within my breast. Slowly creeping up the stairs I go to learn the truth. Who has played this long-time buried memory of youth? On the old piano’s bench, I see an imprint lies, And I think I can hear my phantom lover’s sighs. Sweet ghost valentine, will you please return And play again that melody of love for which I yearn? For the Sweet Valentine Poetry Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Wow... What a beautiful nostalgic poem. Congrats on your well deserved win, Andrea. Made my FAVE list.
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Hauntingly romantic and bittersweet, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Nayda's contest. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 5:39 PM
A haunting melody of long lost love...Congrats on your win...
Gondolf Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Andrea, such a sad sweet romantic story, I really enjoyed it. Congrats on your win. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Wow, you got to use this twice Andrea. A friendly ghost that plays the piano holds such whimsical visions. I loved your ending. Congratulations on your high placement Andrea! : )
Roper Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Andrea, congratulations on this lovely piece :)
Duet Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 9:52 PM
Lovely Andrea...so "surreal" and lovely. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
Kimathi Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Hi Andrea. Congrats for your WIN with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Congratulations Andrea this is lovely.: )
Sietesantos Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:21 PM
So divinely surreal and beautiful, my friend! Congratulations on your win! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
May Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 6:27 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea...Congrats on your win
Barden Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 6:05 AM
Lovely poem and well-placed - hauntingly romantic and ethereal - my favorite traits ... reminds me a lot of my favorite scene in The Notebook ... congrats on the win! Love your work, Andrea! (My favorite creation didn't even place, though it's an international award winner - discouraging).
Negron Flores Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest
Moss Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:08 PM
"Dear ghost valentine, will you please return And play again that melody of love for which I yearn?" It might seem to some the reason we write poems. Nicely done and sweet indeed. Congratulations to you, Andrea.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Andrea, congratulations on you win in my contest with this awesome write ~
Nusker Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 4:16 AM
Just perfect in every way. Congrats on your win, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 2:43 AM
Congratulations on being in the top three Andrea! I can tell you put a lot of thought into this poem. It's very well written! ; ) 7
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Many congrats Andrea its lovely to see this place in Constance's contest:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Andrea, I don't see how you could not place with this in the old contest? Very well written...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Nance Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Great longing and haunting!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 7:50 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. For me this is exceptional. Congrats on your win.
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 7:11 PM
Andrea I remember reading this before. I think it should have received a higher placement. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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May 24, 2013 at 1:44 PM
ANDREA, congratulations with your winning poem, in the "Incurable Romantic" contest... ~xox* Linda
May Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 8:04 PM
beautiful. write...love the last couplet....congrats on your win
Omara Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Have I seen this movie? Or does your poem only make it seem that way.-Red
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