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Sweet Friend O Mine

Hugs embracing clouds shades from the darkest grey to silver floating within Heavenly skies with white patches toning grey I look across the mountains sweeping inside yearning in such sadness burning deep grief sweetly sings Just missing my best friend as the rain begins falling sharing deeply natures spirit Whispering souls through the trees then the seagulls lament floating across silently a soft lukewarm breeze touching across waters Looking down the valley light painting through clouds silver beams moving gracefully Dancing under each branch I pull lately The willow just weeps So lost I am without you love passing you one warm blessing filled with happiness in a smile to my best friend really miss sharing with you

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Date: 10/15/2014 8:03:00 PM
I know the feeling , had a very dear friend die recently. Leaves a gaping hole in ones heart. Your poem echoes that reality and paints it so very well. A super 7 from me my friend.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 8:20:00 PM
robert i wrote this for a very special friend wonderful comment touching beautiful bless you pal
Date: 10/1/2014 3:59:00 PM
I think you must be a very special friend to think this way of someone and write such a poem. It's simply beautiful.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/1/2014 4:17:00 PM
ahh andrea thank you so deeply wonderful comment misted the eyes bless you
Date: 9/30/2014 4:41:00 PM
Lovely, absence (or is it abstinence?) makes the heart grow fonder.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/30/2014 4:50:00 PM
thank you aberfoyle yeah absence does make it grow fonder smiling wonderful comment bless you
Date: 9/30/2014 1:28:00 AM
When we are missing a dear friend it feels like there are always gray clouds hovering over us. But, I hope that the sun will shine down on you very soon.... This poem was so moving and so beautifully expressed. Very nicely done, Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/30/2014 1:33:00 AM
thank you kelly for the so very beautiful comment i pray for that sunshine and pray so it shines too heartfelt comment bless you
Date: 9/29/2014 8:16:00 PM
Very heartfelt piece liam...The passing of a friend is hard to bear but remember they are always with you.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 9:14:00 PM
so very true tim such wise words carrying the eyes of wisdom thank you kindly dear friend bless you
Date: 9/29/2014 4:00:00 PM
The willow just weeps ,as a heart.in grief.The loss of someone dear is always a lot to bear.Sentimental and beautiful Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 4:40:00 PM
charmaine so very true dear friend touching beautiful comment thank you so much for your kind words bless you
Date: 9/29/2014 9:23:00 AM
Nice elegiac and sentimental expressions, liam
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 10:03:00 AM
thank you so much ram wonderful comment deeply appreciated

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