Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Sweet Friend O Mine

Hugs embracing clouds 
shades from the darkest grey to silver
floating within Heavenly skies 
with white patches toning grey 
I look across the mountains sweeping inside 
yearning in such sadness 
burning deep grief sweetly sings
 
Just missing my best friend
as the rain begins falling 
sharing deeply natures spirit
Whispering souls through the trees
then the seagulls lament
floating across silently a soft lukewarm breeze
touching across waters

Looking down the valley 
light painting through clouds 
silver beams moving gracefully 
Dancing under each branch I pull lately
The willow just weeps 

So lost I am without you love
passing you one warm blessing 
filled with happiness in a smile 
to my best friend  
really miss sharing with you

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Robert Lindley October 15, 2014 at 8:03 PM I know the feeling , had a very dear friend die recently. Leaves a gaping hole in ones heart. Your poem echoes that reality and paints it so very well. A super 7 from me my friend. Liam Mcdaid October 15, 2014 at 8:20 PM robert i wrote this for a very special friend wonderful comment touching beautiful bless you pal

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2014 at 3:59 PM I think you must be a very special friend to think this way of someone and write such a poem. It's simply beautiful. Liam Mcdaid October 1, 2014 at 4:17 PM ahh andrea thank you so deeply wonderful comment misted the eyes bless you

D.W. Rodgers September 30, 2014 at 4:41 PM Lovely, absence (or is it abstinence?) makes the heart grow fonder. Liam Mcdaid September 30, 2014 at 4:50 PM thank you aberfoyle yeah absence does make it grow fonder smiling wonderful comment bless you

Kelly Deschler September 30, 2014 at 1:28 AM When we are missing a dear friend it feels like there are always gray clouds hovering over us. But, I hope that the sun will shine down on you very soon.... This poem was so moving and so beautifully expressed. Very nicely done, Liam! Liam Mcdaid September 30, 2014 at 1:33 AM thank you kelly for the so very beautiful comment i pray for that sunshine and pray so it shines too heartfelt comment bless you

Tim Smith September 29, 2014 at 8:16 PM Very heartfelt piece liam...The passing of a friend is hard to bear but remember they are always with you. Liam Mcdaid September 29, 2014 at 9:14 PM so very true tim such wise words carrying the eyes of wisdom thank you kindly dear friend bless you

Charmaine Chircop September 29, 2014 at 4:00 PM The willow just weeps ,as a heart.in grief.The loss of someone dear is always a lot to bear.Sentimental and beautiful Liam. Liam Mcdaid September 29, 2014 at 4:40 PM charmaine so very true dear friend touching beautiful comment thank you so much for your kind words bless you

Dr.Ram Mehta September 29, 2014 at 9:23 AM Nice elegiac and sentimental expressions, liam Liam Mcdaid September 29, 2014 at 10:03 AM thank you so much ram wonderful comment deeply appreciated