Sweet Eternity

These cruel sands of time ...
how they try to torment so.
And yet this true love,
It patiently defies them.
Into sweet eternity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your super win Daniel. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 10:33 AM
congrats Daniel on a fantastic first place win luv.. lovely piece..
Imbery Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:25 PM
so deep, well written!
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