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Sweet Dreams Part 2

Tell me I'm dreaming
I've been waiting all day
I know works important
But I need to get away
I follow his footsteps
Along that bright stream
When all of a sudden
There was a scream

I plunge into the thicket
Not knowing what's ahead
I shortly spotted
A spider and her thread
"I'll weave you a hammock
you look very tired, dear."
"If I lay to rest," I said,
"I'll be dead soon I fear."

I ask her who screamed
She pointed to the north
I bowed and said thank you
And then I bursted forth
This scream was different
Not something too weird
Maybe I'm too late
Something else I feared

I came to a mountain
A mountain made of clouds
I climbed up a little bit and
I met women in shrouds
They dropped bones on rocks
They quietly did chant
"Tell me, young boy
Would you try this plant?"

I inhaled the vapors
They stung my lungs
All of the witches giggled
And stuck out their tongues
I wandered around them
In a confusing haze
Suddenly I felt
Penetrated by a gaze

One witch did stare at me
Never looking away
I went to speak to her but
All faded to grey
I fell from my dream
The sun fell on my face
I'll head back another time
To that enchanted place

-kp-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/4/2008 3:14:00 PM
nothing really...i'm just talking to alexz and writing a new story. what kind of guitar do you play? i like acustic myself
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:44:00 PM
What? Did I offend you or somethin. . . Dammit I always do somethin wrong. . . . .
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:35:00 PM
Cause he is waiting for the right person. . . And anyway I don't even think he really likes me that way no matter wat happens. . . :(
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:29:00 PM
Cause I like this "GUY" and he knows I have feelings for him BUT, he doesn't want a relationship right now. . . Which I respect that. . Really I do But. . . . My feelings are gettin in the way and are makin me do stupid things like tryin to kill myself. . . SOOOOO SAD!!! :....((
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:24:00 PM
I know, I know.... I'm getting my own laptop for either my b-day or christmas. . . I'm SAD :..(((
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Date: 10/17/2008 4:21:00 PM
When you get on look up Razors Are For Shaving
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Date: 10/17/2008 3:14:00 PM
Well bye. . . You should go on to and look up Sam Is Broken Beyond Repair. . .
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Date: 10/17/2008 3:08:00 PM
I'm embarrassed to say this but here it goes......... I actually thought bout.... you all day. . . Now I feel like such an idoit (or how ever you spell it)... What chu doin and thinkin bout right this moment?? If you don't mind me askin...
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