Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Rhyme

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Sweet Dreams Lullaby

sweet gentle dreams ~ come to my little baby’s eyes….
        my baby needs to rest after a long day of fun!

                                        as soft ~ as petals of jasmine are her cheeks,
                                 ravishing ruby-colours ~  of rose are her lips. 

  her eyes got ~ colour blue from the azure sky,
       she got her pretty ~ smile from the butterfly!

                                     tweeting birds gave her all the ~ soothing music
                     the lovely ~ graceful melody charms when she speaks.

  sleep, come, ~ nest ~ gently on my little angel's eyes.
         my baby needs rest after a long day of fun!


                 
                                        April 12, 2021
                                          FIRST PLACE
                        For Nursery Rhymes 4 Poetry Contest
                                     Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Gershon Wolf April 22, 2021 at 7:10 PM 'ravishing ruby colors of rose are her lips' -- adorable verse here, Mala. Congrats on your win in the contest. :) gw Malabika Ray Choudhury April 22, 2021 at 7:28 PM Thank you, Gershon. I really enjoyed writing this lullaby. Appreciate your encouraging comments. BW ~ Mala

Kim Merryman April 17, 2021 at 12:58 PM A sweet, soothing lullaby, Mala! Congrats on your 1st place win in Eve's contest! Blessings, Kim M Malabika Ray Choudhury April 17, 2021 at 4:25 PM Hi Kim, Thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing nursery rhymes. Love ~ Mala

Carol Mitra April 16, 2021 at 11:04 PM Such a sweet write Mala...Congrats on your win..much love, do take care :) Malabika Ray Choudhury April 17, 2021 at 6:18 PM Thanks, Carol. Really appreciate your lovely words. Warm wishes, Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2021 at 2:02 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem ... a wonderful lullaby, Mala :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Malabika Ray Choudhury April 17, 2021 at 4:26 PM Dear Anne-Lise, Thank you very much. Writing nursery rhymes is real fun! Love ~ Mala

Eve Roper April 16, 2021 at 12:19 PM Congratulations on your win, Malabika! Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve Malabika Ray Choudhury April 16, 2021 at 12:55 PM Thank you, Eve, for sponsoring the contest, It's a lot of fun. Love ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna April 16, 2021 at 8:56 AM Coming back to say congrats! Top win and well deserved! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 16, 2021 at 10:25 AM Thanks, Krish. Writing nursery rhymes - I find a lot of Fun! BW ~ Mala

Paulette Calasibetta April 15, 2021 at 1:37 PM How sweet and gentle, a lullaby for every child. Good Luck in the contest. Take Care, Paulette Malabika Ray Choudhury April 15, 2021 at 3:40 PM Thank you, Paulette. So much fun to write a lullaby! Really appreciate your comments. BW ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna April 15, 2021 at 1:03 AM A rock a baby song and nice! One would sing this to a gentle tune! Eve will like this! All the best in the contest!! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 15, 2021 at 3:36 PM Dear Irish, it would be really nice if someone could sing this to a tune. Really appreciate your encouraging comments. BW ~ Mala

Ann Peck April 12, 2021 at 1:24 PM This is so soft and pure, Mala, just like a baby. You did a great job! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 15, 2021 at 3:35 PM Thank you, Ann. I am really enjoying writing nursery rhymes, Ann. It is so soothing! Love ~ Mala

JC Brul April 12, 2021 at 5:14 AM This is a gem...As what I've mentioned in your previous nursery rhyme poem, you could make a Book of Nursery Rhymes...Brilliant!! A sure top winner!!! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 12, 2021 at 5:26 AM Thank you so much, JCB. Your most encouraging comments inspire me so much. Love ~ Mala

Beryl Edmonds April 12, 2021 at 1:51 AM So sweet, a most calming, charming lullaby this is Malabika... Belle Malabika Ray Choudhury April 12, 2021 at 5:24 AM Thank you, Belle. So sweet of you to read and comment on my poem. Love ~ Mala

Alexis Y. April 11, 2021 at 8:58 PM Hi Malabika, You have penned such a lovely “ nursery rhyme” poem. I found it to be soothing and so fitting for the little ones. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-)Alexis Malabika Ray Choudhury April 12, 2021 at 5:23 AM Thank you so much, Alexis. So kind of you to read my poems, and leave the loveliest comment. Hugs ~ Mala

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 11, 2021 at 8:45 PM Mala, yours is such a sweet, soothing, magical lullaby. The repetition and delightful comparisons are sure to charm any child. Blessings, Evelyn Malabika Ray Choudhury April 12, 2021 at 5:22 AM Thank you, Evelyn. So glad to know you enjoyed. Love ~ mala