Sweet Dreams

Dim those lights O sweet moon
Someone I adore is going to join me
I have left that window slightly open
For her to slip into my sweet dreams 
That smile you see on my face
Is for her, as I see her approaching
I take her name and whisper 
That I have left her some space
In my dream for her dreams to fit in
As I hear my own heart beating
With a matching beat she steps right in
As she seeks out my hand
I feel the sweetness of her breath
Her head on my shoulder
Her soft hair flowing on my pillow
Her two eyes like stars shone
I see my reflection in those eyes
As she slowly drops those eyelids
And cradles me in her arms all night!

7.6.22

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 6/8/2022 10:11:00 AM
Sweet dreams indeed Carol. I love the sense of mystery and the opportunity for us to guess the identity of your subject. "Dim those lights O sweet moon" - a wonderful entre into your invitation. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/8/2022 7:55:00 PM
Thanks dear Sam.....I am glad I could weave a bit of mystery into my poem and also into hearts :)
Date: 6/8/2022 1:18:00 AM
Such a very beautiful dream about your dear mom/ loved ones my dear poetess friend Carol. It's nice to wake up from this dream. I like your poem a lot and I enjoyed reading it. CONGRATULATIONS on your win and this sterling write. Thanks for sharing. God bless you. Hugs
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/8/2022 7:53:00 PM
Thank you dear Len.....Its actually about a lover trying to fit the woman of his dreams into his....much love :)
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