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Sweet Dreams

Sweet dreams Waltz soft and smooth Calm under the moonlight Small struggles of the day now loose Slowly let go their weight into the night Succumbed to the deep darkness’ spell Until bright sunrise beams Bid farewell to Sweet dreams February 7, 2022

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/18/2022 10:02:00 AM

Romantic and dreamy Margarita. I love your entry. Congratulations on your Second place win. Blessings xxoo

Meghan Hutchings

Date: 2/17/2022 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations! I really loved this poem! Your choice of words is beautiful for how you depicted the slow drifting off to sleep, which is my favorite part of falling asleep, and then you eased those in deep slumber back to the morning. Very nice! God bless and much love...Meghan

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/16/2022 8:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. You have penned a lovely peaceful poem bringing us from the burdens of the day to the tenderness of sweet dreams. :)Paulette

John Gondolf

Date: 2/10/2022 7:29:00 AM

"the small struggles of the day letting go their weight into the night" I like this thought, Maggie, nicely done as always. Hugs, John

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/7/2022 7:54:00 AM

Undoubtedly … if we remember our dreams, that is!