Margarita Lillico Poet Rictameter

Sweet Dreams

Sweet dreams 
Waltz soft and smooth 
Calm under the moonlight 
Small struggles of the day now loose 
Slowly let go their weight into the night 
Succumbed to the deep darkness’ spell 
Until bright sunrise beams 
Bid farewell to 
Sweet dreams 

February 7, 2022

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Connie Marcum Wong February 18, 2022 at 10:02 AM Romantic and dreamy Margarita. I love your entry. Congratulations on your Second place win. Blessings xxoo

Meghan Hutchings February 17, 2022 at 11:17 AM Congratulations! I really loved this poem! Your choice of words is beautiful for how you depicted the slow drifting off to sleep, which is my favorite part of falling asleep, and then you eased those in deep slumber back to the morning. Very nice! God bless and much love...Meghan

Paulette Calasibetta February 16, 2022 at 8:10 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest. You have penned a lovely peaceful poem bringing us from the burdens of the day to the tenderness of sweet dreams. :)Paulette

John Gondolf February 10, 2022 at 7:29 AM "the small struggles of the day letting go their weight into the night" I like this thought, Maggie, nicely done as always. Hugs, John

Unseeking Seeker February 7, 2022 at 7:54 AM Undoubtedly … if we remember our dreams, that is!