Sweet Diamante

Chocolate Delicious, smooth Melting, setting, tempting Milk, dark, jelly-babies, candy Colourful, mixture, shapes Fizzy, chewy Sweets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gondolf Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 4:11 AM
Dark chocolate is my favorite, I like white chocolate too. Your scribble has started a craving, Liz. :) You seem to like this form. Hugs, John
Archer Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Sorry didn't mean to trigger a craving lol. I do like this form although I wasn't sure at first.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Hello Liz Archer, just by reading this poem, you got me craving for chocolates. so nice to meet you. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Hello Liz Archer, i love chocolate to. When it is closer to Christmas i do make some chocolates. Now i crave it but it is not the time of the year to make it. the heat is too strong it would melt. Enjoybyour evening my friend.
Archer Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 2:40 PM
Hi Darlene, I'm often craving chocolate lol, I mostly eat dark. Nice to meet you. Thanks, and you!
Cunningham Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Your poem takes the reader into a sweet shop Liz, have lost one or two fillings to chewy chocolate eclairs lol. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Archer Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 2:38 PM
Lol oh dear. I'm due a filling but I can't stop eating cake and chocolate. Thanks, its going well so far. Hope yours is too!
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