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Sweet Diamante

Chocolate Delicious, smooth Melting, setting, tempting Milk, dark, jelly-babies, candy Colourful, mixture, shapes Fizzy, chewy Sweets

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John Gondolf

Date: 7/15/2021 4:11:00 AM

Dark chocolate is my favorite, I like white chocolate too. Your scribble has started a craving, Liz. :) You seem to like this form. Hugs, John

Liz Archer
Date: 7/15/2021 4:57:00 AM

Sorry didn't mean to trigger a craving lol. I do like this form although I wasn't sure at first.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/14/2021 12:13:00 PM

Hello Liz Archer, just by reading this poem, you got me craving for chocolates. so nice to meet you. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2021 3:28:00 PM

Hello Liz Archer, i love chocolate to. When it is closer to Christmas i do make some chocolates. Now i crave it but it is not the time of the year to make it. the heat is too strong it would melt. Enjoybyour evening my friend.

Liz Archer
Date: 7/14/2021 2:40:00 PM

Hi Darlene, I'm often craving chocolate lol, I mostly eat dark. Nice to meet you. Thanks, and you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/14/2021 10:35:00 AM

Your poem takes the reader into a sweet shop Liz, have lost one or two fillings to chewy chocolate eclairs lol. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Liz Archer
Date: 7/14/2021 2:38:00 PM

Lol oh dear. I'm due a filling but I can't stop eating cake and chocolate. Thanks, its going well so far. Hope yours is too!