Sweet Desire

George Aul


Early in the year, birds chirp a song
to the couples who show us love,
the sweet kiss of desire
is prominent in Spring;
the touching of lips
in Earthly time
reminds us
of truth -
love.



For "Nonet Me A Spring Kiss" contest sponsored by Michael J. Falotico.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 12:56 PM
blown away with this breathless piece, george... amazing! :) hugggs, nette
Muzzey Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 10:01 AM
A wonderful, charming, and romantic write for the contest. Good luck! Caryl
Sweetheart Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Precious words George to infiltrate both Spring and luv..my friend.. good luck in the contest by Michael .. he surely will luv this one as I do ...
Fraser Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Delightful Nonet George. Fitting piece for Michael's contest, good luck....:)
Horsman Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 7:33 AM
good luck with this wonderful entry in to the contest. Harry
Richards Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 3:48 PM
This makes me smile, lovely poem, George!
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Very sweet, George, Good luck in this fun contest.
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 1:19 PM
To me the most romantic act between a man and woman is simply this -- a kiss. You described it so well, George. Best wishes in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 12:23 PM
beautifully defined and worded the sweet kiss of the spring, George
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:37 AM
awwwh, you make me melt, george... winning wishes :) huggs, nette
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:30 AM
I do not wish to be Micheal in judging this contest.. George you have a brilliant entry here ;) Good luck to you
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