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Sweet Desire

My eyes widen and mouth starts to water then I’m drooling. My eyes follow her as she lightly steps through the room making her way, meandering in and out of tables towards me. I hardly notice her tight short black dress, stockings and white apron. See in turn never averts her eyes from me sensing my anticipation. As she approaches me my throat let’s a little gasp erupt into my mouth And then she lifts her arms out in front of her and holds out my prize. The biggest and best ever knickerbocker glory and it’s all mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/1/2019 8:22:00 PM
Your poem's anticipation captivated me all the way through, Grahame. Great last line. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/2/2019 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, Grahame, your gracious words warm my heart deeply. Your talent brightly shines and will continue to grow in brilliance, my friend.. ~Susan
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Grahame Mahrer
Date: 5/2/2019 12:19:00 AM
Thank you Susan for your kind words and well done for your win. One day I hope to be able to create poetry like that. Thanks again
Date: 5/1/2019 5:34:00 AM
Lol, great surprise ending Grahame, much enjoyed. Congrats. :)
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Grahame Mahrer
Date: 5/1/2019 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Gary I glad it brought a smile to you

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