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Sweet Danish

the cup, a sip away, just out of reach, as i taste all your poetry — like sweet danish to my caffeinated morning. the cup, just out of reach, but i’m too excited to read the lovely confections in front of me. my hand longs to grab the mug’s handle, but like a cloud i drift. finally, i take a sip — lukewarm at best, but friends you are worth it! 8/9/2019 danish - Danish pastry

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Date: 8/10/2019 6:07:00 PM
Beautifully done; I read it and I smiled and I smiled and I smiled and I could not stop smiling. Poems rarely do this to me, but this one did, Kim, so thank you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2019 6:12:00 PM
Thank you so much! I’m smiling now :):)
Date: 8/10/2019 1:40:00 PM
This shows to me, what a large heart you have for poetry, poet. Extremely well written with balance. Thanks Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2019 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend! You are a wonderful poet yourself! Love reading yours!
Date: 8/9/2019 8:44:00 AM
That and much more...Nice one Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2019 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo!
Date: 8/9/2019 7:09:00 AM
Lovely, Kim. Enjoy!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 8/9/2019 6:59:00 AM
A splendid way to start the morning--many can relate to the feeling you describe in your poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2019 6:59:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay! :)

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