Sweet Citrus

I kissed July's hot tangerine lips
swam in cool aquamarine eyes
basked in blond and honey rays
dreamed in mango pomegranate sunsets 
of lime hillsides and marmalade roses
Years of sweet citrus passed in golden hours

One day I woke
to find translucent eyes 
in burnt sienna
as trees wept leaves
in burgundy and olive
Soon the eyes
were frozen in powder
Ashen shadows blew
across barren groves
of spindled spruce
and howled 
with December's lonely moon
But from my fire lit window
I hold fast to memories
of daffodils and oranges
mingled with the burn
of lemon tears


7/16/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 7:50 PM
AWESOME, love love love your colourful imagery.
Cozart Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Thanks so much, Line, for your kind comments.
Makama Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 11:57 AM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
Cozart Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Thank you very much, Funom!
Shagun Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Congrats Mr.Dale..,a great poem
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thanks, Shagun.
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Dale, this is a brilliant metaphorical maze leading the reader into an ever deepening darkness. Well done.
Cozart Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Thanks very much, John!
Makama Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 1:25 PM
A big big congratulations to you friend.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 11:37 PM
Congratulations, Dale.
Wood Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 12:17 PM
A colorful write Dale. Congratulations on this well deserved win. - Dean
Cozart Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 12:02 PM
Lovely conglomeration of colors and emotions! Congrats on a well deserved win, Dale!
Cozart Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Thanks very much, Kim!
Richards Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 9:26 AM
I love the delicious metaphor of colors you have used to describe the seasons, Dale ! What a wonderful poem you have written !! A big congratulations to you!
Cozart Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Thank you so much, Carrie! And likewise to you!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 12:30 PM
Enjoyed this dazzling poem Dale! Masterful:-)
Cozart Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Thanks very much, Keith!
Sands Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Dale this is an outstanding poem! Every line of it. Saving this one as a FAV :)
Cozart Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Thanks, Heidi, I'm glad you like it.
Daniel Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Absolutely brilliant writing, Dale:)
Cozart Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thanks very much, Jo!
White Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 3:50 AM
To start with, I just adore the contradiction in the title. That alone is pure poetry. And for the rest? Wow, wonderful and romantic. Great poem.
Cozart Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Thanks, Darren. I really enjoyed your elf collab with Chris.
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 8:24 PM
I suddenly have the urge to go to the produce market... Wonderful Dale
Cozart Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Load up on tangerines! Thanks, Tim.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Wow! You penned an absolutely brilliant poem, Dale. Every line is a string of pearls. A jewel of a poem! Candidate for POTW. Love always.
Cozart Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Aw, thanks, Freddie. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the profound compliment.
Green Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Now this is classic Dale. Just pure beautiful mesmerizing poetry. I love all of the citrus references and how wonderful it felt when December arrived...at least to me. This was gorgeous.
Cozart Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Thanks, Chris!
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