Notes About The Poem

Sweet Breezes

swept to the housetops
on fragrant breezes so fine
petals in the wind

hues flying springtime
when the world has come outside
cherry blossom rain

saffron clouds creeping
in warm sunshine of our days
petals on jade grass

petals glide past hills
and over the silver lakes
then dance in midair
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February 12, 2023 at 2:07 AM
this poem is so beautifully written, once you read it you get caught in the image, i can smell the cherries blossom rain in the air, amazing!
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February 12, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Thank you for your remarks, which uplift and delight. :)
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February 5, 2023 at 8:58 AM
A lovely Haiku write. I can smell the pretty "cherry blossom rain." Have a  blessed/wonderful~day/weekend...........
Buehler Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 9:27 AM
I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem and its imagery, Paula. Thank you so much. Blessings
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February 5, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Your haiku set is just fantastic, Evelyn. You conveyed such great imagery with calming blooms.
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February 5, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Thank you so much for your kind expressions. :)
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February 5, 2023 at 4:59 AM
"petals on jade grass"....can't wait to see them again. A very soothing group of blossoms here Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Springtime will be upon us soon. Thank you so much.
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February 4, 2023 at 11:10 PM
Four lovely haikus, Evelyn. Loved the cherry blossom rain.
Buehler Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Thank you for the great pleasure of your appreciation. :)
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February 4, 2023 at 4:49 PM
So lovely to read your poetry again, Evelyn... Harry
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 8:13 PM
Thank you, Harry. It's nice to hear from you. Hope your weekend is nice.
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