Sweet Bleeding

In a Texas commercial circus the journey is set vehicled by hormonal energy beginning from the cashier's tag well placed on her blue shirt exactly on her very firm left Breast with the name "Carmen" The route of desires his wants drive through having a static attention on her mammary glands but the Life in him, already as far as Bremen. Engineered by libido so troublesome which takes it guns, even in no provocation. Just usual bare skin stimulates the production of his semen and simple feminine curves blacken his mind with bitumen as part of him slides down the huge lumen of intense sexual intentions. He places the General's rank on his 'small head' then the big one becomes void of all acumen. Eyes fixed, body static, lips separated all these, irritating the nearby women as this middle-aged being drops to the lowest point of all men. Planning on a tour below her abdomen his road trip revolve round her hymen a well covered pretty damsel yet he sees as flesh full of foramens in a place far from a serenity of physical intimacy yet somehow he falls for an unforeseen trap of infernos desires. His heart, the only villain as it rejects any deal with this sudden natural cause. A flood of laughter and jeers welcome his total presence once again, he tries to wave off the premonition of a bad omen not knowing, to the corruption of his thoughts his 'third leg' all along has been saying AMEN!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nigros Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 2:30 AM
i love the write very much.... are you from SA?
Nigros Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 2:09 AM
Amazing, My Surname is Makama as well.....
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Thanks a lot Patrick. I am not from SA
Jimase Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:39 PM
Wow!
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 7:56 AM
nice to know I am wowing someone
Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:37 AM
A most powerful write - enjoyed reading this piece. Kindest regards.
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Thanks a lot Pandita
Horsman Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 9:39 AM
This is amazing poetry Funom, I don't get on soup much these days, but this is sure an welcome to my return...
Makama Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Oh harry horseman. Thanks a lot for your amazing comments
United Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 9:33 PM
A very strong poem that took me by complete surprise , You are a very talented poet indeed,
Makama Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words
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